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Post by Hush Riddler on Mar 16, 2006 20:50:30 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300]Its really not that long, I just hit the enter key a bunch of times.... and thanks for the claps. I'll give some *snaps* to you [/shadow]
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Mar 18, 2006 0:36:54 GMT -5
I probably won't be writing here for awhile. I have a senior project that is writing a three act play (I chose it) and that needs to be around 90 pages. I really need to put all my writing skill into this. I'll be back, writing another season when I can.
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Post by Hush Riddler on Mar 18, 2006 7:12:18 GMT -5
I probably won't be writing here for awhile. I have a senior project that is writing a three act play (I chose it) and that needs to be around 90 pages. I really need to put all my writing skill into this. I'll be back, writing another season when I can. Have fun, you know I have a few plays I wrote in my spare time, and I can let you use them... That's probably plagerism... But if it isn't I'm willing to help... Hope you at least have time to read my Joker story, good luck with the three act play.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Mar 18, 2006 10:13:11 GMT -5
Wow, good luck on that Dark Knightwing, if you need any help, we're all here too
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Mar 18, 2006 10:15:31 GMT -5
Wow Dark Nightwing! I know you will do an excellent job on that I'll probably have my story updated today. Mabye, Techno has been wanting me to watch Nightmare On Elm Street, so I'll do my best to come up with a great ending .
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Post by blinker on Apr 26, 2006 20:25:02 GMT -5
My idea for a Superman show:
Title possibilties:
The Superman It's Superman Adventures of Superman
PLOT: X (number in the air) number of years since Superman appeared in Metropolis and became the symbol of Truth, Justice and Peace not only in that city and that country, but the world. By this time, he has already faced 5-10 to close to 20% of his enemies and Lois Lane has been chasing him around for her stories (as well as other things).
To start of...
In Season One; all three sides of the Man of Steel are facing situations. Superman is fighting his enemies who come back from time to time and is mostly fighting Lex Luthor as well as a mysterious new enemy. Clark is trying to push himself to reveal that he is Superman to Lois and tell her how much he loves her. While Lois, whom is obivious that she loves Superman, learns that she has feelings for both Superman and Clark with Clark being the strongest. And lastly; Kal-El knows about his real parents and the Krypton planet and how it was destroyed. But he wants to learn more about the home he came from like his heritage, what life was like there, his birthright.
In the three part season finale; it is revealed that the new enemy is Cadmus, which Luthor funds and controls (if people there like it or not). Luthor has created his own Project: Superman which succeeds where his Bizarro program failed as he plans to use to kill Superman. His own 'son': Superboy.
Superman fights Superboy which causes great destrucation in the city. Since Superboy has everything Superman has, including his feelings. Once Superman breaks his control, Superboy sees how much Luthor is the evil one and Superman the good one. Both the Man and Boy of Steels fight off Luthor and his Bizarros he uses to hold them off. When the battle is over, Superman takes Superboy to Kent Farm as he considers him part of his family since their DNA is the same. Thus he names him: Connor Kent.
For Jeff Matsuda: This is my second idea on Superman (first was Superman/Batman). Either one is fine. It's just that I would really want to see these ideas of mine become reality.
SEASON TWO -- coming soon.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Apr 26, 2006 22:16:29 GMT -5
I really like that Blinker! You've combined all three sides of Superman that could create some new tensions, struggles, and great plots! Can't wait for season 2. If I may, I might want to write some episode summaries for your series, if you and I can work on it together
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Post by blinker on Apr 26, 2006 23:15:52 GMT -5
I kinda like that. But for some reason, I hate the fact that this is fan made when in fact I would really want this to actually happen.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Apr 27, 2006 19:42:57 GMT -5
Kinda makes you face reality huh?
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Post by blinker on Apr 27, 2006 21:35:07 GMT -5
Sadly, yes.
But if Matsuda and the TB gang are here, then they should know these ideas of mine.
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Post by Jack-Ups on Apr 28, 2006 15:05:10 GMT -5
Yes Yes to bad you cant send it some where (apart from LoG ) and try and promote it to Warner Bros!
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Post by All Star Batman on Jun 28, 2006 11:50:54 GMT -5
*D.A.V.E. appears on every T.V. in Gotham including Barbara's* D.A.V.E.: Good evening Gotham. I am back to finish the job I assured you I would complete being Gotham's Ultimate Criminal Mastermind. The Batman may have miraculously been able to confuse my system in the past, but being the ultimate criminal, I uploaded myself through a backup file left in the Arkham Studies where Prof. Strange used to lurk. Now without hesitation I will finish The Batman off and claim Gotham as my prize. I assume that The Batman is watching this right now, so let this be a direct message: Batman, you may have been able to confront me before and take advantage of my system, but this time, there will be no flaws in my master plan. To conduct this plan, I will first need to acquire a weaponary device that will aid me. I'm sure that the great detective won't have to struggle to pinpoint my location. Until our next confrontation Batman *ends transmission on all T.V.s* Barbara gets up ready to leave but she then remembers Robin and is jealous that Batman would take him in so comfortable while she had to destroy the New Olympus just to get some attention. As she grumps The other Dynamic Duo heads off to the facility where D.A.V.E. is at. Meanwhile, at Stately Wayne Manor, Bruce Wayne and his ward Dick Grayson, view D.A.V.E.'s broadcast and immediately head to the Batcave. They suit up, jump in the Batmobile and speed off to D.A.V.E.'s location. Robin: So, who is this guy anyway? Batman: He's a computer system created by Proffesor Strange designed to be the Ultimate Enemy. He almost revealed my identity to Gotham, but I was able to screw up his circuits and crushed him with the giant penny. Robin: Ouch. So where is he? Batman: Batwave tracked to a GothCorp technology facilty. Whatever he wants, it's somewhere in there. Robin: All right, let's go unplugg this bad software. The Batmobile speeds off. The scene fades to the Goth Corp. Industry Building where D.A.V.E. enters as a guard spots him and takes his gun out threatingly. Guard: Who are you?! D.A.V.E.: The last villain Gotham will ever need. D.A.V.E. walks up to the guard as the shots are deflected by his armor and he grabs the guard by the neck with his hand and the guard gets shocked and falls unconscious. D.A.V.E. then enters the main database of Goth Corp. with hundreds of computers that have calculations of future constructions in Gotham, bank information, and much more top secret information about Gotham. The scene goes to Robin and Batman which enter the facility where they see the unconscious body. Batman closely examines the body. Batman: He's been shocked. Robin: How strong? Batman: At least 10 times stronger than Joker's average joybuzzer. Robin: Ow...so this is the work of D.A.V.E.? They see the handprint and it matches D.A.V.E.s. D.A.V.E. is in the room and he inserts his fingers into electric ports that connect to the computer and starts downloading all the information. D.A.V.E. suddenly moves quickly as he dodges 3 batarangs. D.A.V.E.: Hello Bruce. It's been a long time. Batman: Not soon enough. What are doing here D.A.V.E.? D.A.V.E.: Well, if you must know, I'm attempting to do is try to locate the weapon I'm seaching for. I thought it was here, but masterminds do make mistakes. Batman: What exactly is the weapon? D.A.V.E.: That my friend is a secret. Let's just say it's a big thing. Oh, here we are. Hmm. Interesting place to hide such a weapon. Well, if you excuse me. Robin: You're not going anywhere. Robin pulls out his battle poll and attacks D.A.V.E. Batman: Robin, no! D.A.V.E. easily defeats Robin, hitting him so hard, he flys across the room and hitting a cabinet, with tech falling on him. Batman then tries to battle D.A.V.E. with Batarangs in each hand. D.A.V.E. then grabs one, knees Batman in the stomach and elbows his back causing him to fall. D.A.V.E. then escapes. Batman then goes over to Robin. Batman: You alright. Robin: Yeah, just a little banged up, but I'll live. That was a bad idea wasn't it? Batman: We'll talk about leaping before looking later. We need to find out what D.A.V.E.'s after. Robin: How are we going to that? Batman: D.A.V.E. left a hint, like when Riddler leaves a riddle. If I look in the files, we can tell what he's after. He only got copies. Batman looks over the computer and finds something. Batman: Oh my god. Robin: What? *Looks at computer screen* Holy cow. Batman: We gotta get to the airport. They take off and head to the airport in the Batmobile. We then zoom in on the computer and see a picture of New Olympus. Its around 3 a.m. now and D.A.V.E. is next to the airport. He doesnt go in but uses his sensors to locate the fuse box that is on the outer wall of the airport. He heads to that direction and blows the fuses and the airport shuts down. As the lights go off everyone inside is confused, and panic. Intercom: Please stay calm everyone. We are experiencing a power shortage which will be fixed immediately. Everyone decides to calm down. Meanwhile Barbara is still at home mad but decides to contact Batman and see if she can help. She tries to contact Batman but the Batwave signal doesnt work. She gets more mad and decides to head out by herself. Batman and Robin are in the Batmobile heading to Gotham International Airport. Once they reach there they see all the lights off and everything is pitch black. Batman: D.A.V.E.s preparing to disassemble the airplanes that are currently not working and using the data that he compiled from Goth Corp., he'll have the knowledge of building his own Olympus aircraft. Robin: Don't we have an aerial vehicle back at the cave? Batman: Yes but we're too late for that now. *Batman pauses for a moment thinking* But not too late for her. Batman contacts Alfred Alfred: Is everything all right Master Bruce? Batman: Fine Alfred, check the tracker I left on Batgirl's new belt and tell me her location. Alfred: One moment sir. She is about 8 blocks away from the Gordon residence. Batman: Good, it's time she took the Batwing out for a spin then. Put it on autopilot and track it to her location. I'll take it from there. Alfred: Very well then. Batgirl is jumping from rooftop to rooftop and using her grapple when the Batwing suddenly appears infront of her. The cockpit opens and she jumps inside. Then Batman appears on the screen. Batman: Batgirl, are you there. Batgirl: Oh, it's you. What's all this about? Batman: D.A.V.E.'s back and he's creating a new New Olympus and planning to destroy Gotham with it. Batgirl: Oh, I get. I take the first one out before, and now you need help blowing up the new one. Is that all I'm good for to you. Batman: Is something wrong? Batgirl: Oh, nothing wrong, unless you count me being replaced. Batman: What? Batgirl: You know, Robin. It took me months to finally get in the loop, and then this kid shows up and you welcome him with open arms. Batman: There's a big difference between you and him. You do this because you want to help, he does it because he has the same reason I do this. We both lost someone close to us because of crime. You wouldn't understand it. Batgirl: Sorry. I didn't realize. I don't deserve to be a sidekick. Batman: No. Before Robin came in, you were doing great and I accepted you. I always knew you had potential. I never planned for Robin, it just did. Will you help us? Batgirl: Yeah, let's do this. Where is this guy anyway? Batman: D.A.V.E.'s at the airport. Me and Robin will be their shortly. Try to get their before he raises the new Olympus. Batgirl: I'm on my way. Batgirl takes off to the airport in the Batwing. But meanwhile at the airport, D.A.V.E. has completed the new New Olympus and it takes off, but before he does, he blows up the airport like Maxie Zeus did to City Hall. D.A.V.E.: Next stop, Gotham. D.A.V.E. is inside the much bigger and more deadly Olympus aircraft where his fingers have extended into the main circuit of the ship, so that he could control it's every movement. Also Transferring his new upgraded version 2.0 energy, he allows this Olympus to strike volts of electrical energy down to the earth at any time without having to recharge. Being connected to the ship, D.A.V.E. is now PART of the Olympus. The Olympus heads to Gotham in a fast moving pace. Looking from D.A.V.E. first point view in his sensors, it indicates that Gotham City will be reached in a matter of 15 minutes. The Batman and Robin see the ship overhead and quickly turn around. D.A.V.E. sees Batman and Robin in the batmobile below. D.A.V.E.: It appears that The Batman was arrogant enough to try to halt my master plan. Defeating me takes more than a mere man. It's time to show the people my true threat, beginning with the death of Batman and his young accomplice. Batman and Robin then see the Olympus. Robin: Oh no, there it is! Then, the blaster at the bottom of the ship starts to charge up. Batman remembers this. He grabs Robin, and opens the hatch. Batman: Hold on. The beam then shoots down at them, and Batman's Batglider pops out and he and Robin fly away just in time before the Batmobile is destroyed. Meanwhile, on the Olympus, D.A.V.E. is happy with himself. D.A.V.E.: Pitty. He was a worthy adersary. Now onto Gotham. Batman lands the Batglider, as he and Robin watch D.A.V.E. fly away. Robin: Oh, this is great. Our ride's totaled and Batgirl isn't here yet. Please tell me you got a back-up. Batman: You know how to ride a bike right? Robin nods his head and Batman press something on his belt, causing the Batcycle on autopilot to ride their. Batman: Stay here and wait for the Batcycle. I'm going after D.A.V.E. Batman takes off with his Batglider, leaving Robin to wait for the cycle. Meanwhile, Batgirl in the Batwing is still heading to the airport but then sees the Olympus straight ahead, and is shocked and amazed. Batgirl: Oh boy.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jun 28, 2006 11:53:20 GMT -5
The story above is a story me and the Dark Knight were working on in the RPG in the Gaming thread. But since we were the only ones doing the story, we decided to put it over here. Right now it's Dark Knight's turn. Stay tuned for more.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jun 28, 2006 12:54:38 GMT -5
Batman contacts Batgirl
Batman: Batgirl
Batgirl: I know, it's a lot bigger than last time!
Batman looks into the sky and sees the volt cannon about to charge
Batman: Barbara! Turn left! NOW!
Batgirl quickly turns as the charged beam misses hear and explodes in a a static field far away. Batman glides up to the batwing but as he does the zap cannons under the aircraft start shooting at him as he tries to dodge them. He gets hit by one and detaches his glider as he grappels onto one of the wings on the batwing. He goes on top of it.
The scene heads to D.A.V.E. he has finished downloading his own program into the Olympus. He detaches his fingers from the ports and heads up to the top of the Olympus. The circular top door opens up as D.A.V.E. appears on top of the Olympus. He jumps so high he disappears as Batman and Batgirl wonder where he went. He lands right on top of the Batwing
Batman starts trying to punch D.A.V.E. but he dodges them and then slams his palms on the batwing and electrifies the Batwing causing it to shut down. Batgirl is stuck inside and Batman uses his timed batarang to explode the top. As Batman helps her get off, D.A.V.E. kicks Batman and makes him lose balance and fall. Batgirl throws a batarang at him but D.A.V.E. just flicks it and walks forward. He then puts his hand on her neck and she gets shocked.
She falls off unconscious. Batman catches her. D.A.V.E. he jumps 30 feet in the air back to the Olympus and descends into the aircraft. Batman and Batgirl jump off as the batwing falls to the ground and the wings fall apart.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jun 28, 2006 13:10:11 GMT -5
As they are falling, Batman shoots a Batgrapple at Olympus and gets on top of it.
Batgirl: I don't suppose you have anyother plans?
Batman: My original plan was to self destruct the Batwing inside Olympus, but since it's destroyed now, I don't know what to do.
Batgirl: What if you distract D.A.V.E. and while your doing that, I can put this thing in the water again?
Batman: That could work. Let's find an opening first.
Batman and Batgirl find an opening hatch on the ship.
Batman: Stay here. He's part of the ship now, and cameras are everywhere. You'll have to wait until I find him, when his attention's on me.
Batgirl: Okay.
Batman goes inside and walks through the halls, as the cameras are watching.
D.A.V.E.: Quite persistant. I think I'll let him come. As we can have our final battle, but this time, only one will survive.
Batman get's to the control room without anything happening. He looks around and no one there.
Batman: Where the..?
D.A.V.E. then jumps from the cieling trying to attack Batman, but he dodges. They have a long stand off.
D.A.V.E.: This ends now.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jun 28, 2006 19:25:31 GMT -5
She came out of it.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jun 28, 2006 20:01:58 GMT -5
Batgirl runs through different doors trying to find the right way to go while the cameras watch her every movement. As Batman fights D.A.V.E. he starts to think as he starts losing.
Batman: Gotta try to use unpredictable movements....
Batman starts moving in a circle around D.A.V.E. he then does a fake punch on D.A.V.E. who dodges, and while he fake punches, he swiftly trips D.A.V.E. with his leg. He immediately gets back up and runs toward Batman. Batman just stays there and then takes out a timed batarang and jams it in D.A.V.E.s head and jumps over his head as he runs. The batarang explodes but D.A.V.E. is still standing strong.
D.A.V.E.: You think Im not familiar with this strategy Batman? It's merely a sign of desperation.
Batgirl is still running around and soon the security cameras start charging and a little red dot in the center fires a beam of electricity. It shocks her as she falls to the ground. She struggles to get into the next room. She manages to get in and sees its the room where D.A.V.E. was in downloading his system. She sees the autopilot on and quickly turn the switch the opposite way. It starts downloading a file to turn the autopilot off.
Batman starts dodging more of D.A.V.E.s swift punches. Batman feels desperate for a new strategy but tries to keep D.A.V.E. guessing. He runs towards D.A.V.E. then slides under him and grabs his legs and pulls him down. D.A.V.E. lands with a thud. Batman grabs both of D.A.V.E.s hands and presses them together to electrify him.
D.A.V.E.'s circuits overfry and he stops moving. The Batman takes an ice pellet and freezes him on the ground.
The auto pilot downloading file is still only at about 36 percent when all of a sudden the camera in the back of the room shocks her and she falls. Batman hears her scream and runs to the room and then brings her to the roof of the Olympus. Batman thens grappels part of the Olympus and lowers Batgirl down to Robin. The batcycle had just arrived and he tells Robin to bring her to the batcave and let her rest. Batman grappels back up and goes back into the control room, where the auto pilot control download is at 70%.
Gotham is almost in sight.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jun 28, 2006 21:53:07 GMT -5
Hey guys, I forgot to update everyone on my play. It took about 23 hours to write, it is 84 pages long, and I am very, very happy about what I have accomplished. It is titled In the Rain.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jun 28, 2006 22:26:10 GMT -5
Batman is growing impatient as Gotham is nearly in sight and the autopilot file isn't completed yet. But suddenly, D.A.V.E. reboots himself and breaks free from the ice. He tries to attack Batman, but Batman becomes aware and throws an exploding Batarang into D.A.V.E.'s faceplate and BOOM, just a headless robot. Batman looks over at the control panel, and autopilot is shut down. Batman then takes control of the ship and steers it to the harbor. Minutes later, Batman shuts the ship down completely and the ship starts to plumet to the water. Batman jumps out threw a window and as he's falling he presses something on his belt and the Batboat comes out from it's hiding spot and Batman lands in it nicely. It was still a hard landing though. As he sits in the Batboat he watches the New Olympus crash into the water, as the circuits start to fry and it explodes. The New Olympus is destroyed and hopefully D.A.V.E. along with it. The next morning Batgirl wakes up in her house dressed as Barbara again as her father walks in. Gordon: Hi Barb. It was another late night again. I'll tell you about it later. Anything interesting happen with you? Barbara: *smiles* Nothing out of the usual. Batcave Robin (as Dick now): So, what now? Both the Batmobile and Batwing are destroyed. How're going to get around Gotham. Batman (as Bruce now): This isn't the first time this has happened. We'll just rebuild. Robin: What about D.A.V.E.? You think he's gone for good? Batman: I thought he was once. But that's the thing with these maniacs. They keep coming back. EPILOGUE: We are at the bottom of the harbor where New Olympus is crashed. We go inside closer into the ship. And in one control port, three little red dot light up. The End....?
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jun 29, 2006 12:55:53 GMT -5
Hey guys, I forgot to update everyone on my play. It took about 23 hours to write, it is 84 pages long, and I am very, very happy about what I have accomplished. It is titled In the Rain. Great to hear it was a success in your eyes. Im sorry I couldnt help out or even remembered. But wow 84 pages! Astonishing work I presume
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jun 29, 2006 12:58:24 GMT -5
Great way to end the story All Star! Im going to write the same story but Im going to edit your parts. Itd be cool if you edited my parts and see how the story turns out
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jun 30, 2006 11:16:35 GMT -5
Hey guys, I forgot to update everyone on my play. It took about 23 hours to write, it is 84 pages long, and I am very, very happy about what I have accomplished. It is titled In the Rain. [shadow=green,left,300] Congrats DN That's a great accomplishment [/shadow]
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jun 30, 2006 21:55:13 GMT -5
Thanks Kat.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jul 6, 2006 17:26:58 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300] Okay, now that D.A.V.E and I have starred as villains who's next? I'll be happy to go again if no-one wants to star. ;D [/shadow]
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jul 29, 2006 0:42:07 GMT -5
"Face to Face Part I" 4/10 First of all, wouldn't Bruce have had the Batwave on vibrate? Second, he wouldn't have gone to Strange as Bruce. Bruce and Strange have only very limited experience together, so he would have gone as Batman so that he could get more information. The circus scene seemed like it was pulled from Batman Forever. I think there is still a lot that needs to be worked out and improved. "Face to Face Part II" 6/10 That was a weak way to introduce that Gordon knows about Barbara being Batgirl. I didn't like that Clayface was simply arrested once the police showed up. That made no sense that they could just cuff him. Two Face really didn't have a lot going on in this episode or the previous. I don't think that Yin should know who Batman is. Good fight scene with Clayface. I like the revelation that Strange let the "faces" out. I am undecided on the "role" of Strange. Here are some of the responses since I wont be modifying the story 1. Has the batwave ever been on vibrate before? 2. Bruce, being the son of Gotham's 'favorite' son would indeed be concerned about the safety of Gotham. 3. It wasn't a circus, no tent or anything. It was a 'carnival' as in outdoors with stands and such. 4. As a mentioned, Clayfac experienced a revelation at the end of the episode according to Yin. 5. And for your pleasure, I took out Gordon finding out Batgirl's identity.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jul 29, 2006 22:39:16 GMT -5
I think I'm going to start writing some more. I have an idea for my own hero by the name of Outcry. The powers are loosely based upon Shriek from Batman Beyond. Outcry can control sound. The story is that of government secret projects and conspiracies of that sort. His origin is that he was part of a top notch military unit that was "off the records". One of the duties this unit had was the testing of military weapons. Outcry, also known as Shawn Fox, was testing a new machine that controlled sound frequencies. The "cryers" were designed as twin gauntlets. During the testing, the power of the cryers went out of control. The sound waves caused an avalanche in the ceiling, and that caused an explosion. Outcry managed to escape the burning building, but he did sustain massive burns. His entire chest was covered in scars. The cryers melted to his skin. He then spent a few years running from the military, for they wished to recover the technology he carried around on his arms.
This is just a rough outline. This is intended as a comic book, rather than a television show. I hope that I can get a few of these up before the end of the summer. I hope you guys will like them.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jul 30, 2006 22:05:01 GMT -5
"Face to Face Part I" 4/10 First of all, wouldn't Bruce have had the Batwave on vibrate? Second, he wouldn't have gone to Strange as Bruce. Bruce and Strange have only very limited experience together, so he would have gone as Batman so that he could get more information. The circus scene seemed like it was pulled from Batman Forever. I think there is still a lot that needs to be worked out and improved. "Face to Face Part II" 6/10 That was a weak way to introduce that Gordon knows about Barbara being Batgirl. I didn't like that Clayface was simply arrested once the police showed up. That made no sense that they could just cuff him. Two Face really didn't have a lot going on in this episode or the previous. I don't think that Yin should know who Batman is. Good fight scene with Clayface. I like the revelation that Strange let the "faces" out. I am undecided on the "role" of Strange. Here are some of the responses since I wont be modifying the story 1. Has the batwave ever been on vibrate before? 2. Bruce, being the son of Gotham's 'favorite' son would indeed be concerned about the safety of Gotham. 3. It wasn't a circus, no tent or anything. It was a 'carnival' as in outdoors with stands and such. 4. As a mentioned, Clayfac experienced a revelation at the end of the episode according to Yin. 5. And for your pleasure, I took out Gordon finding out Batgirl's identity. Sorry about that review. It was a little too picky. I was a little disappointed at the time because my Scarecrow story (which I thought was brilliant) didn't get that great of reviews. Sorry about that. It was rather petty.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Aug 18, 2006 22:45:30 GMT -5
Let's get some more stories going. I'm writing an opener to season 4 of JLU. I am pulling out all the stops for this one. When I finish, I believe it will be quite long. If it works out half as good as I'm thinking, it will still be a great one.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Aug 19, 2006 11:38:29 GMT -5
Well it doesnt have to do with The Batman but Dark Knight and I are writing a Spiderman series on the Off Topic forums.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Aug 28, 2006 21:57:13 GMT -5
I'm decided to change my season 4 intro into a JLU DTV. I'm going to maka a separate thread for it when I'm done. It will be quite long, but I think it will be one of my best I've written. I say that about everything I write, but this one really will be awesome.
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