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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 16, 2006 19:14:02 GMT -5
Your Solomon Grundy episode was cool. We had a similar take on Rojas not being there anymore. I liked the old rhyme being used. I think that most of us on here have an issue of time. How much should there be in the episode? A lot of people don't have enough to fill in all of the time. I find that mine are usually a bit too long.
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 16, 2006 21:53:33 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Wow... Riddler was a robot? Yea... this is a really fantastic story, D.N..... but... It's not how I invisioned Misty Ree. But, I think its really good.
8/10
A hero for you[/glow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 16, 2006 22:09:00 GMT -5
"Misty Ree" This episode starts out with Batman at the end of one of Riddler's games. The setting is the inside of building, in an old abandoned apartment complex. R: "How did you get past all of my riddles? I made them nearly impossible. Between the diversion, the gondola, the framing, you couldn't have gotten past everything!" B: "It is just you and me now Riddler. None of your helpers are here to save you. Your cane is broken, so there won't be any computer hacking today. Now I have a riddle for you. 'What is the Riddler without a computer or henchman?' Just another guy." R: "No... no...NO!! I am a mystery. I am a genius. I am the smartest person alive." B: "If that were true, then why would you leave clues to every crime that you have ever committed? And how come I continue to catch you?" R: "I will show you I am more than you know. I will show you that I am a GOD!" Riddler snaps the top off of his broken cane and jumps out the window. He uses his cane as a zipline to a nearby powerline outside. Batman goes to follow him, but Riddler throws the piece of cane at the powerline. The powerline starts to fall and there is an old man in a walker underneath it. Batman jumps down to save the man, and just barely succeeds. Batman looks of into the distance to see Riddler in his Question-car speeding off. B: "It's never easy." The screen goes black and says "A FEW MONTHS LATER". Barbara is in class, asleep. The bell rings and she wakes up suddenly. She walks out of class and into the halls. She is joined by her friend, Darla. D: "So Bar, that class was a snooze fest. I could tell that you agree." B: "I need to start staying awake for Biology, or I'm going to fail." D: "Relax, I fell asleep too. Old man Herman puts everyone to sleep." Another girl joins them. "Hey, have you all heard about this teenage girls club?" B: "I must have slept through that." D: "I heard about that. It sounds like fun. They have all kinds of games there. It has a study group too. At least that is what I've heard." B: "I could really use a study group. When is it?" The other girl starts talking again: "Here is a pamphlet." She hands Barbara the pamphlet (go figure). The scene cuts to Batman and Batgirl on a stake out. BG: "Wow, I had no idea stake-outs were so boring." BM: "Something has been going on lately. I can't explain it. This place is going to be robbed tonight." BG: "How do you know? Do you just have your fingers crossed or..." BM: "I just know." BG: "Well, I can't do any stake out tomorrow. I have a girls club thing I am going to try out." BM: "Girls club? Is that some kind of support group?" BG: "I don't think so. I need a support group for staying awake." BM: "You're the one that wanted to go on a stake out." BG: "This isn't what I had in mind." The scene cuts to Batman and Batgirl returning to the Batcave. BG: "Well that was a... (she's yawning) waste of time." BM: "It'll be hit tomorrow." BG: "Don't you mean today?" They look out at the rising sun. The scene cuts to Barbara attending the girls club with Darla. B: "So when is this thing going to start?" A woman approaches a podium. D: "I think it is starting right now." The woman starts talking into the microphone. "Welcome! I am so happy to see so many girls here. Here at the Teenage Women Club, we look forward to giving young women such as yourself some direction in life. We will teach you anything that you would like to know about anything." Barbara whispers to Darla: "The answer to anything? I have a computer at my friends house that really can answer anything. The speaker continues: "We would like to show you a video. Please come into our full length movie theater. B: "Wow, they didn't spare any expense." All of the girls go into the movie theater. Barbara sits down in her seat and falls asleep. When she wakes up, the movie is over. She looks over at Darla, but she is looking as though she is in a trance. B: "I fell asleep again. I can't stay up for anything. Darla? You okay?" The lights come back on and the speaker comes out again: "You are all one of us now. If you have anymore questions, please ask me. My name is Misty Ree. You can call me Misty. Now, commence the mission!" B: "What mission?" The whole crowd starts to run out the door. Barbara is caught up in the middle and can't get out. They keep running until they get to their destination. It is the same place that they had done a stake out of the night before. Batman is watching from a rooftop. Barbara notices and starts screaming for him. Batman uses his grapple to swing over the crowd. Barbara puts her hand in the air and Batman lifts her from the center of the group. BM: "So this is that thing you were talking about. Get changed, we have some work to do." Batman and Batgirl go down to try to stop all of the girls. They underestimate the girls and don't eve get into stop them. One of the girls is injured in the process, but she just keeps on limping. Batman and Batgirl limp over to the Batmobile. The girls head back to the club. Meanwhile, Riddler is giving a speech to the rest of the club. R: "You will follow me in pursuit against the evil entitity. The reason no one has defeated them, was because they thought they were the good guys. Evil is the police force and Batman. Follow me to defeat the evil of the world and take what they have stolen from us. Are there any questions?" One girl in the back starts jumping up and down with her hand up. She then says: "Oh, can I get an autograph? Please Mr. Riddler! I lover you!" She is wearing a shirt that has four question marks on it. R: "Query! Echo! Get that girl out of here. She isn't one of us." The girl starts screaming: "Please Mr. Riddler! Just a signed photo or something. I'm good at riddles. Ask me anything." She continues talking all the way until she is thrown out of the door. The girls return. Misty Ree starts carrying the limping girl. MR: "Oh great leader, will you heal one of our own?" The leg is by now, in really bad shape. R: "She needs to see a doctor. She could die from that." MR: "But you are all powerful. You should be able to heal her. You are our prophet." R: "Send her to a doctor." Misty Ree turns around and starts to walk away. Then she grabs Riddler's new cane and starts hitting him with it. MR: "He is a false prophet. We must not follow this man anymore. We shall start a search of the prophet." Batman and Batgirl arrive. They begin to fight there way toward Misty Ree. Eventually, Batgirl accidentally spilled some water on one of the girls. The girl woke up from the brain wash. She informs Batman and he lights a match. The sprinklers go off. Misty Ree is not affected though. She attacks and is ultimately defeated. Batman recovers Riddler, who is in a daze. Riddler starts saying all kinds of riddles, except he messes them up. BM: "So you think you are a genius... or a god." R: "I am a god. I am a god. Smartest person of alive. I am a smart as a person. God, a I am." Ha ha very funny that girl in the story is suppose to be me right? Just kidding I liked the story so much I am going to print it out and read it when I need a good laugh and amusement. I will hero you later but still I mabye a fan but if he dare try to kick me out I would dogpile him and pull his hair until he gave me his autograph lol. Just kidding Riddler wouldn't really kick me out but just in case *pulls out a secret picture of him skipping through the flowers in 'Fleurs De Maul* Riddler:" No!!!! That photo was taken out of the cartoon for a reason! I was under Poison Ivy's control that's not my fault I did that!" Me:" Oh yeah tell that to the villains in Arkham I won't show it to them on one condition..." Riddler:" What?" Me:" Do whatever you fans ask you to of course now sign this photo." Riddler:" *Sighs* You win you are one of my biggest fans along with that other person I threw out." Me:" What other person?!?!" HUSH Riddler:" *wakes up while seeing himself inside a dumpster* Ewwww!" Me:" *smacks head* Oh that's just great you threw my partner in the dumpster.... come on and help me get him out."
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 16, 2006 23:19:08 GMT -5
Wow gotta read both stories tomorrow after school
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 16, 2006 23:33:14 GMT -5
I new that ? ? ? ? would get a kick out of being included in the story. And Riddler wasn't a robot. He was just beaten senseless. I knew nobody would expect me to do this as my Misty Ree story.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 17, 2006 7:43:01 GMT -5
I new that ? ? ? ? would get a kick out of being included in the story. And Riddler wasn't a robot. He was just beaten senseless. I knew nobody would expect me to do this as my Misty Ree story. Ha, perhaps I was Misty Ree beating Riddler senseless lol. I'm not that crazy of a Riddler fan, if I really wanted to get his autograph I would have went to Arkham to get it ;D. I am thinking up a story but, it might take a while. P.S. I am thinking of making a shirt with four question marks on it lol. I really doubt Riddler would kick me out because then I would be very sad.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 17, 2006 13:07:15 GMT -5
You should definitely put that shirt on here if you make it. Anyway, you know that you weren't Misty Ree. I don't think you could hit Riddler to save your life.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 17, 2006 16:56:37 GMT -5
Curse me being so sentimental. Riddler is part of my childhood I couldn't dare hurt him... if you read "The Book of Crooks" it actually says," Riddler suffers from an obsessive compulsive desire for attention" I have to feel bad for him, for without Batman he has no purpose. Anyways I gave my Aunt a pattern design for a Riddler henchmen/woman uniform and she might be able to make one but just in case she can't I will try to work on a question mark shirt ;D.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 17, 2006 17:07:55 GMT -5
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