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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 10, 2005 18:40:11 GMT -5
Awesome Riddler
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 11, 2005 0:01:44 GMT -5
Wig?!? That is funny I say if he did have a job he would put his hair into a pony tail and work as an MJ impersonator haha lol. Or whatever . Your story is great Dark Nightwing although Riddler's father in the comic (Legends of the dark night) he abused Riddler but whatever I like your story better. Although I must say Robin on the show won't make it better it will only take up more time. Oh well Riddler will destroy Robin anyways lol.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 11, 2005 10:36:49 GMT -5
Thats a pretty good origin Nightwing! Kill his father though?
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 11, 2005 11:34:44 GMT -5
Well if my father abandoned me and abused me as a child Riddler had a right to be mad you Nightwing I actually don't know what happened to Riddler's mom. But, if they could make a show on the essence of him I would be fine I really feel sorry for him. Riddler is very unique and the only villain willing to show the world that he is special. Riddler has done the best job on the show of my opinion. When I look at Riddler I feel like something has happened to him and I feel so bad for him, (In the 'Book of Crooks' Riddler's bio says this statement,"Riddler suffers from from an obsessive compulsive desire for attention. In essence, he is a riddle with no answer." I wish Riddelr would have an episode of what he does currently in his life and has the name Edward Nigma I love that name.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 11, 2005 18:44:53 GMT -5
OK, here is my Mad Hatter story. This is a two-part episode.
"Break Out" Part One
It starts out with Killer Croc breaking out every major villain in both Arkham and Gotham Jail. The villains include Joker, Penguin, Poison Ivy, Ventriloquest, Clayface, Man-bat, Bane, Catwoman, Gearhead, Firefly, Mr. Freeze, and Ragdoll. When Batman, Batgirl, and Robin investigate the villain break out's all the villains go immediately rob places. Batman and company catch the Joker, only he isn't acting like the Joker. He has a glazed look. Batman finds a mind control device on the back of his head. Then Batgirl asks, "Who do you think did it?" He responds, "Sometimes, it's who is missing that is the biggest clue." Batman gives the assignment of catching all of the villains to Batgirl and Robin. He lets Batgirl use the Batbot and Robin use the Batcycle. Before he leaves, he calls detective Yin via Batwave and tells her about the mind control device. Then informs her that Ethan is under the control too. Then asks her to keep an eye out for Robin and Batgirl. From there, Batman tracks down the Riddler's layer. Upon finding it, he notices that the whole place is trashed. When Riddler comes out, his hair is all messed up and he looks exhausted. Then says, "Not the rodent that I was expecting." Batman asks, "You aren't behind this?". Riddler responds, "I followed the Rabbit down the Rabbit hole." Batman mentally says, "He must have hacked something he wasn't supposed to" then vocally says, "Where do I go from here?". Riddler responds, "Where would you like to go?". Batman says, "I don't know." Riddler says, "Then it doesn't matter which way you go." Batman mentally says, "Two Alice in Wonderland references, must be Gotham Theater. They are doing a play on Alice in Wonderland." Then Batman says, "Riddler, your coming to help me. It is either that or I arrest you." Riddler cries, "I can take you." Batman: "You can hardly stand up. You better just come with me. I can protect you." Riddler grudgingly agrees. Goes to commercial. It comes back into Batman and Riddler, where they just arrived at Gotham Theater. In the middle of the stage, Mad Hatter is having the mad tea party. He then calls out to Batman, "Welcome to my party. There is still plenty of drinks left." Seated at the table is an unknown woman, Toymaker, and Maxie Zeus. Batman answers, "We didn't come for tea." MH: "What a shame. Now these two have to give you some medecine." Toy Maker and Maxie Zeus then attack Batman and Riddler. Batman fends both of them off then rounds on Mad Hatter. MH: "Good job, but I think that you better look around you." Surrounding Batman and Riddler is about a thousand mechanical, 4 foot tall rabbits. B: "Can you handle this?" R: "Do bats have wings?" Batman activates the Batglider thing and says "Yeah." Batman flys over the Rabbits and attacks MH. Once MH is defeated, Batman frees the woman's from the mind control. She asks, "What happened? I was just in the middle of rehearsal when that creep attacked me." Batman is about to explain, when Riddler has all the Rabbits self destruct. Then Riddler grabs the mind control thing that the woman had had and sticks it into Batman. The episode ends with Riddler having a siloloquey, "I know have The Batman and most of his enemies under my control. Now it is time for my favorite riddle; what to do next?"
To Be Continued...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 11, 2005 21:54:28 GMT -5
Nice I give you a hero for making me laugh and amused. Great story Dark Nightwing I love the messed up hair part. lol
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 22:16:45 GMT -5
here's a little Harley story i just thought of...
HarleyTown-
Bruce must attend a meeting out of town in Metropolis, and as Batman, informs Batgirl that he will be "taking off" for a couple of days. Not understanding whether or not to fight crime or not without his help, Batgirl checks out the city anyways, and discovers a timer, connected to a huge vat of glowing red liquids, rigged to blow up. as she attempts to defuse it, she is interrupted, and as she turns around, she's met with a punching extend-o glove. The camera zooms in on the perp, a woman, with an ordinary ski mask. but then she reaches down, and plucks off Batgirl's mask, not bothering looking at the face, and puts it on... Meanwhile, Bruce is on an airplane to Metropolis, when he looks out the window and discovers a gigantic Joker Blimp, hovering towards Gotham, a stream of laughing gas trailing behind it the plane makes an emergancy landing, and he takes off as Batman, chasing down the Joker. Batgirl wakes up, bound in skipping ropes, and is confronted by "Harley Quinn", who has modified batgirls mask, replacing the bat ears with a jester hat, and with a small red cape, instead of the big black one. Batgirl breaks free, finds a circus mask in the shape of a bat to hide her identidy, and battles Harley, who is just another common thief to begin with, but slowly reveals that she is a master gymnast(rivaling Batgirls abilities), escape artist, and athlete, who has slowly been taking on a persona towards clowns, at her hideout at "Circus World", a run-down, abandoned craft store, which has been redecorated. Batgirl ends up in a battle on a high wire with Harley, which results in Harley being thrown down into a giant jack-in-the-box, which closes, just as Batgirl falls, and catches herslef on the handle, which twists, launching Harley into a pile of boxes... Batgirl puts on handcuffs, moments before the Batmobile hurtles through the wall, followed quickly by a falling blimp. Joker is also taken into custody, and as they're brought to Arkham, Joker looks over... "I'm Joker! I'm the head honcho around here!" "WOW! The real "Clown-Prince of Crime!" I'm Harley! Harley Quinn, at your service..." *Joker gives an evil smile...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 22:19:32 GMT -5
it would give an interesting intro to Harley, that has nothing to do with the Joker at first! and it leaves an opening to see whether or not she joins with him at all too! i would love to hear ur valued opinions!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 12, 2005 22:32:50 GMT -5
here's a little Harley story i just thought of... HarleyTown- Bruce must attend a meeting out of town in Metropolis, and as Batman, informs Batgirl that he will be "taking off" for a couple of days. Not understanding whether or not to fight crime or not without his help, Batgirl checks out the city anyways, and discovers a timer, connected to a huge vat of glowing red liquids, rigged to blow up. as she attempts to defuse it, she is interrupted, and as she turns around, she's met with a punching extend-o glove. The camera zooms in on the perp, a woman, with an ordinary ski mask. but then she reaches down, and plucks off Batgirl's mask, not bothering looking at the face, and puts it on... Meanwhile, Bruce is on an airplane to Metropolis, when he looks out the window and discovers a gigantic Joker Blimp, hovering towards Gotham, a stream of laughing gas trailing behind it the plane makes an emergancy landing, and he takes off as Batman, chasing down the Joker. Batgirl wakes up, bound in skipping ropes, and is confronted by "Harley Quinn", who has modified batgirls mask, replacing the bat ears with a jester hat, and with a small red cape, instead of the big black one. Batgirl breaks free, finds a circus mask in the shape of a bat to hide her identidy, and battles Harley, who is just another common thief to begin with, but slowly reveals that she is a master gymnast(rivaling Batgirls abilities), escape artist, and athlete, who has slowly been taking on a persona towards clowns, at her hideout at "Circus World", a run-down, abandoned craft store, which has been redecorated. Batgirl ends up in a battle on a high wire with Harley, which results in Harley being thrown down into a giant jack-in-the-box, which closes, just as Batgirl falls, and catches herslef on the handle, which twists, launching Harley into a pile of boxes... Batgirl puts on handcuffs, moments before the Batmobile hurtles through the wall, followed quickly by a falling blimp. Joker is also taken into custody, and as they're brought to Arkham, Joker looks over... "I'm Joker! I'm the head honcho around here!" "WOW! The real "Clown-Prince of Crime!" I'm Harley! Harley Quinn, at your service..." *Joker gives an evil smile... I like the thought of Batgirl in a "solo" position for an episode. I don't think that Harley should have decided on an identity until this final meeting between her and Joker. How about making her extremely serious as a villain who did all of this training for her debut? Don't tell anyone this is Harley until this final meeting of the two. And Joker says to her, "No matter how things are, there is always something to smile about." Then she is the transformed Harley.
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 22:35:36 GMT -5
hahaha! that would be a nifty idea... but i still like the idea of there being a harley in her costume episode, before she meets the Joker...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 22:53:18 GMT -5
Devil's Face-
Mayor Grange's term is coming to an end, and already, votes are being cast for a new mayor... the candidates being Hill, an old lawyer, or Dent, the previous District Attorney. Bruce gets ready to vote for Dent, hearing many good things about him, just before he watches as a limo pulls up, and literally snatches Hill away, and Bruce discovers Harvey Dent in the other side of the limo, with the window down, frowning at Hill, looking angry. the limo pulls around the block, and Dent gets out for the local debate with Hill, who obviously doesn't show up, due to Dent sending him away, and Dent's image is once more raised. Bruce changes into Batman, and follows the limo, as it leads to the clock tower, and stalks behind as Harvey's thugs take Hill up into the clock head. Batman tackles out the thugs, and attempts to save Hil's life, as he has been tied to a bomb, set to blow apart the clock head, with Hill in it, but Harvey inturrupts, and has a conversation with Batman. Batman makes a sudden move at Hill, and in one swift sweep, unlatches Hill from the bomb, while Harvey idiotically fires away at Batman, hitting the bomb. Batman leaps through the face of the tower, with Hill in his arms, just as the whole clock head explodes. there is a brief glimpse of a body flying from the opposite clock face, and as it hits the ground, Harvey rolls onto his right side, revealing his burnt left side, which is horrifically scarred and torn... he is sent to a hospital, with barred windows, and Hill wins the election, after teeling the tale of Harvey's corruption...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 23:30:35 GMT -5
Riddler's Reviews-
TV Soap Stars begin to disappear, kidnapped while in their dressing rooms, which are left with a scrap of paper, containing a "review" on their acting and on the show, which also contains a riddle. as Batman follows the clues closely, he is led to the Gotham Docks, where Riddler has set up a skill-testing "Brain-Game", where all the actors must answer question after question about several things about the others. if they answer incorrectly, they are dropped underwater, for 10 seconds the first time, and doubling every wrong answer. Batman grabs the actors, and knocks the Riddler into the seat that locks them in place, and dunks them underwater. as it plunges under, it stays for one minute, and as it emerges, the Riddler is sparking, and spurting out oil from his mouth. it is a robot. the giant screen that contains all the questions(very jeopardy like, with the names of the actors as categories) flashes to the riddlers face, as he shouts out "TRAPPED!" the actors lunge at Batman, as they turn out to be the riddlers cronies in disguise, and Batman is plunged into the Question Box, where he is quizzed, not about himself, and his true identidy, like in RIddled, but about Riddler, who slowly tells his sad tale of how a young Edward Nigma was twisted into the gothic villain he is now, describing a past of how he was raised in an orphanage that eventually burnt down, after Nigma was released, and how he became obsessed with tormenting the people around him, like the people who worked at the orphange, who used to beat him. the only difference, Nigma uses Riddles! at the end of that tale, Riddler takes off in a boat, as he was secretly under the docks all along, leaving Batman to be pushed underwater forever. Batman escapes of course, and stares out at the water... The soap stars are revealed in Riddlers quizzing last quotes to Batman, and he finds them also hidden under the docks. The riddler is now a tragic yet evil character to Batman...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 12, 2005 23:51:40 GMT -5
Humour and Terror
While in Arkham, Langstrom digs his way out of his cell, into the main hallway, and makes a run for it. Just as he's about to get out the doors, he is blocked... by Joker. Joker explains that he's the one who'll be escaping tonite, and that Langstrom will have to be the decoy. Langstrom chuckles in an evil tone, and Joker looks at him, puzzled. Langstrom holds up a vile of his formula. A guard suprises both of them, and as Langstrom injects himself, Joker plunges his own vile of Laff Gas into Langstrom, and the two solutions mix. Langstrom has a horrible reaction, and becomes a huge, grinning bat, Man-Bat, with a Joker twist. Joker is totally shocked, as the "Joker-Bat" snatches him, and flies away. The guard, who has been slashed in the arm by the violent creature, begins shaking, and transforming into the horrible rictus-state of the Joker, but at the same time, a mindless minion, more human than bat though, to Man-Bat. Batman learns of Joker's kidnapping, and, during his nightly shifts, has a run-in with the "Joker-Bat", and is scratched. He also begins transforming, but not before he injects himself with a rabies shot, which only stops the transformation half-way. He chases after Joker-Bat, leading to a cave near Arkham, and discovers Joker, terrified, in a cage, and is forced to battle Joker-Bat, one-on-one, while the other infected people begin to gather near the cave. Alfred races to slove the solution to find an antidote, and figures one out, and is forced to race after Batman, carrying the solution. Batman gives one antidote to himmself, and struggles to stab one into Joker-Bat, but when he does, it stumbles, and attempts to fly, only to revert back to Langstrom, who falls, into the darkness... the infected automatically revert back to their normal selves, and Joker escapes, while search squads continue to look for Langstrom...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 13, 2005 0:15:05 GMT -5
March of the Penguins
Penguin is released from Arkham, just in time for the holidays, with a clean bill of sanity. Batman doesnt think twice to watch Oswald, to make sure he's not up to his old schemes. He jumps out at Ozzie as he slips a christmas present in front of Bruce Wayne's door. Oswald claims that its only as an apology, to "forgive and forget"... later, Bruce opens the package, and finds a spiffy watch, with penguins engraved into the frame. he checks it in the lab, and is astonished to find that its not rigged in any way. Bruce decides to get a gift for Ozzie, as to be polite, and gets him an umbrella, with a penguin handle. As Ozzie recieves the gift, he tests it out, but as the umbrella opens, the launch force accidentally sends oswald down a flight of stairs, and his eyes seem to reopen, with an evil glare in them. he grabs the umbrella, and sneaks up behind bruce,(while he's checking at the bottom of the stairs) and tries to choke him witht the handle. Bruce flips Ozzie over his shoulder, and makes a run for it. Later, at the Wayne Mansion, Alfred discovers a second gift for Bruce, which has been falsely recorded as being from Yin... as he opens it, a large robotic penguin head opens its mouth, and spouts out gas, knocking Alfred out. Penguin marches in, accompanied by the kabuki twins, and then by a whole flock of penguins. as he looks for Bruce(whos out as Batman inn the city), Penguin falls into the grandfather clock, which opens up, and reveals the elevator to the batcave. penguin enters it, and is absolutely angered! Batman returns in the batmobile, and is confronted by penguin, who hits him on the head with alfred's serving tray as soon as he gets out of the batmobile. batman and penguin battle, while the penguins enter and are attacked by a flock of bats. the kabuki twins cartwheel in, but are thrown into each other, and tossed into the batmobile, and batman grabs a batarang, and tosses it upwards, where it hits a stalacite(or stagamite, or w/e you call it) and it falls, and hits penguin in the head, and he too rolls, unconsious, and amnesiac like, into the batmobile, which, upon programing, hurtles to the police station, where all three are dropped out of the vehicle, and arrested by Gordon. The penguins are rounded up, and brought to the Gotham zoo, and Penguin is questioned about who Batman is, but is unaible to answer...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 13, 2005 1:06:43 GMT -5
A Baneful Heart-
Bane's creator, recently captured, is released, after creating a reversal solution for Mr Freeze's condition. As Mr Freeze undergoes the procedure, the session is interrupted, as Nora Fries enters the room outside, looking in at Victor, who is totally shocked. Behind a curtain, Dr Lopez, Bane's creator, goes all shifty-eyed, and switches a plug, replacing it with a familiar yellow steroid serum. as Victor and Nora's eyes lock, almost romantically, Victor gets a sudden jolt, and begins breaking through his ice suit. He becomes gigantic, and is only half-way through the procedure that should thaw him, and only needs a slight chill to keep him alive. angered, he grabs Lopez, making threats, and takes off, busting through a wall, and jumping several stories below. Batman, who was watching in the shadows, tells Nora to wait, and chases after Freeze. it is then that a second character slides from the shadows. *Bane* becomes angry that his creator has been kidnapped, and grabs Nora, and takes off the other way. As Batman loses Freeze's trail, he is stuck, waiting for any news. he learns of Bane's escpape, and Nora's kidnapping, and becomes very frustrated... Meanwhile, Freeze, who was originally going to use Lopez as a hostage to get cured, instead uses him as a trade for Nora. The pumped up Freeze meets up with Bane, and a battle insues. Bats gets in the middle, and is bashed aside. Nora helps him, and steps into the fight, head on, causing Freeze to stop right away. Bane takes the oppurtunity to snatch Lopez, but as he runs, Freeze pulls the tube from the back of his arm, causing him to shrink again. Lopez: "The three of us could have been partners! We could have had anything we wanted!" he then fires a tazer thing at Freeze, who shrinks and begins overheating. Nora screams as he becomes deathly looking, as he attempts to cover up with ice again. Lopez and Bane take off, and Batman grabs Freeze, and zooms him over to Arkham, where he is refrozen in a cryogenic tube, while Nora waits for his recovery, visiting every day until then...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 13, 2005 7:34:00 GMT -5
Riddler's Reviews- TV Soap Stars begin to disappear, kidnapped while in their dressing rooms, which are left with a scrap of paper, containing a "review" on their acting and on the show, which also contains a riddle. as Batman follows the clues closely, he is led to the Gotham Docks, where Riddler has set up a skill-testing "Brain-Game", where all the actors must answer question after question about several things about the others. if they answer incorrectly, they are dropped underwater, for 10 seconds the first time, and doubling every wrong answer. Batman grabs the actors, and knocks the Riddler into the seat that locks them in place, and dunks them underwater. as it plunges under, it stays for one minute, and as it emerges, the Riddler is sparking, and spurting out oil from his mouth. it is a robot. the giant screen that contains all the questions(very jeopardy like, with the names of the actors as categories) flashes to the riddlers face, as he shouts out "TRAPPED!" the actors lunge at Batman, as they turn out to be the riddlers cronies in disguise, and Batman is plunged into the Question Box, where he is quizzed, not about himself, and his true identidy, like in RIddled, but about Riddler, who slowly tells his sad tale of how a young Edward Nigma was twisted into the gothic villain he is now, describing a past of how he was raised in an orphanage that eventually burnt down, after Nigma was released, and how he became obsessed with tormenting the people around him, like the people who worked at the orphange, who used to beat him. the only difference, Nigma uses Riddles! at the end of that tale, Riddler takes off in a boat, as he was secretly under the docks all along, leaving Batman to be pushed underwater forever. Batman escapes of course, and stares out at the water... The soap stars are revealed in Riddlers quizzing last quotes to Batman, and he finds them also hidden under the docks. The riddler is now a tragic yet evil character to Batman... That story really touched me I think I have a tear drop emerging. A hero for you but, if you notice almost every villain is the same wanting to be alone the only thing I disagree with is the gothic statement he is pretty much the same purpose as other villains having fun.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 13, 2005 17:01:57 GMT -5
You have a real talent in writing these stories Joe! I liked the Penguin one when he really was changed until that slight concussion. A hero for you form me as well Excellent work!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 13, 2005 18:26:27 GMT -5
"Round Up" Part Two (by the way, this is now going to be a three part episode.)
It starts right where Batman had left Yin to find Riddler. Yin calls all the police station, giving the info about the mind control that Batman had told her. It is at this moment that she is attacked by Poison Ivy. Batgirl (in the Batbot) appears and does battle with the giant tree that Ivy is riding around on. Yin watches the fight for a few moments then gets out a gun to attack with, but then Firefly hovers down from about 50 feet. He uses his flamethrower to meldown her gun. Rojas arrives in his squad car, and then shoots out Firefly's jet pack. Firefly falls to the ground and is out cold. Robin arrives at the scene in the Batcycle and tries to take charge of things. He is told off by Rojas. Robin grudgingly accepts Rojas is in charge of this one. Meanwhile, Batgirl is standing on top off an unconscious Ivy. Bane attacks her. She is fighting as hard as she can, but in a losing battle. She ejects from the Batbot and throws a batarang at Bane's tube, but she misses. Gordon appears and unloads his clip on Bane's tube, but to no avail. He then grabs the picks up the batarang that Batgirl tried to use and hurls it right at Bane's tube, ultimately making him scrawny again. Then Batgirl cuffs him. Robin is back on the Batcycle and is now chasing after Gearhead (he is in one of his cars). As he is catching up to him, Mr. Freeze ices the roads. Robin jumps of the cycle and a quickdraw showndown occurs, where Robin, seemingly stole one of Firefly's guns when he had been arguing with Rojas. After Freeze is torched and cuffed, Robin takes up the pursuit of Gearhead. It cuts back to Batgirl cuffing Penguin. She is then attacked by Clayface. Yin and Rojas run to their former comrade. Rojas is just about to aim to kill him, when Yin grabs the gun. The gun fires and hits the device that causes the mind control. Clayface awakens his usual self. He looks around, confused for a second then sees the smoking gun of Rojas and begins an attack. Yin stands between Rojas and Clayface. After a long conversation between Clayface and Yin, he agrees to help the police (big emotional part of this ep.). Robin drives up beside Yin, Rojas, Clayface and says to them, "We have some big problems". From the way that he just came, standing there is Riddler with his cane that he hacked into Hatter's mindcontrol devices. Behind him is Catwoman, Man-bat, Killer Croc, Ragdoll, Maxie Zeus, Toymaker, the Ventriloquest, and Gearhead. Standing beside Riddler is Batman, with a newly mindcontrolled Batgirl and Commisioner Gordon.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 13, 2005 18:34:57 GMT -5
Great Story I give you a hero!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 13, 2005 18:42:59 GMT -5
Okay then both I love your story! (Ha Ivy riding a tree lol) I can't stop thinking about Ivy screaming, "NO" in "Fluers Du Mal" HAHA god if I were in the studio with Piera Coppola saying that and I was drinking water god I would have spat that stuff out and fell to my knees laughing.
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 13, 2005 19:43:37 GMT -5
o, and thats a great story u have going ther, i like how it involves all of Batmans villains! grea intro for mad hatter, The Dark Nightwing!
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 13, 2005 19:44:21 GMT -5
Will you? Won't you join te Dance?
Batman investigates the disappearance of Alfred's niece Alice, who was visiting in Gotham from England, only to disappear after visiting the Theatre, where a live play of Through the Looking Glass, when the Mad Hatter stood up, jumped from the stage, and unleashed a gas on the audience. over the first week, all the members of the audience were slowly unleashed, but were arrested for stealing from banks, jewelry stores, and even their own homes. each and everyone of them. except two of them, one being Alfred's niece. as batman looks for clues at the theatre, he notices that theres a trapdoor under the Tea Party Table, labeled "The Rabbit Hole". batman opens it up, and jumps in, shocked to realize how deep it really was. as he lands, at least a story below the stage, he finds himself in the sewers, that have drained, leaving a mud covered surface. in the mud, batman follows a set of tracks, and as he does, he realises that they lead him to the police department, and when e opens the manhole where the tracks stop, he is confronted by the Mad Hatter, who has Commisionar Gordn under his control, wearing a police cap with a large "In This Style 10/6" card. Gordon draws out his gun, but Batman kicks it away, and gasses Gordon. Mad Hatter takes off down a hallway, and into a police line-up room, that has a long table set up inside, with two women sitting at the tables, staring like zombies at each other. batman runs in, and Mad Hatter is no where in site. suddenly, the two women, one being Alice Pennyworth, lunge at batman, with large knives, and slash at him, cutting his cape, and pinning it to the table. mad hatter enters, and pulls a gun from out of his hat. as he is about to fire, batman grabs the tea pot, and whips the scrching tea into the Hatter's face, and on his hat. the master chip, in his hat's card, malfunctions, releasing his control over his victims, and electrocuting him into unconciusness.batman helps alice pennyworth to a cab, and helps the other woman, whos name is also alice, to phone for a ride.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 13, 2005 20:26:46 GMT -5
Argh you're too good I cant take it!
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 14, 2005 1:29:23 GMT -5
Superstitions and Superman Part 1
Batman breaks in on a heist, with a man calling himself Lex Luthor at the head of the operation. They are robbing the police evidence lock-up, and they get Luthor gets away with a bag of evidence. Batman fiercely questions one of Luthors thugs, who finally spills the beans and tells him that Luthor took of with a hunk of green stone. Batman rushes out of the lock-up, and is sent hurling into a wall by an incredibly strong fist, from a hovering man in a red cape. "who the devil are you?" "thats just what i was about to ask you! you're not part of Luthor's regular gang. as far as i know, he doesnt support ppl in BAT costumes!" "at least i have a theme, cape boy..." "its SUPERMAN!" he shouts, as he flies at bats again, breaking his fist through the wall. batman tumbles back into the lock-up room, and accidentally opens one of the safe's, next to the broken-in one, and pulls out a green, glowing stone, and superman goes into agony! Batman punches Superman, who becomes defenseless, and Batman handcuffs him, and remembers wat Luthors mugs say, about luthor taking a hunk of green stone... bats checks the log to see wat was in fact inside the vault that Luthor thought was the bag containing the glowing stone, and is horrified to learn that its none other than a dust skull from Wayne's mansion, from during the "Lost One's" event... Meanwhile, Luthor opens the bag of evidence, and pulls out a handful of dust. Angered, he orders his mugs to kidnap the first people they see on the streets, and he sets out a public announcement to Gotham Cities Police Force to surrender the Kryptonic Stone from evidence locker #851-0833, or else the people will meet terrible fates. Bats rushes to get the stone to Luthor, proposing a trade for the people and the dust corpse, worrying that Dracula may be brought back, accidentally...
Superstitions and Superman! Part 2
Superman burns his way into Luthor's warehouse, and takes down all of the mugs, setting the hostages free. Batman just arrives in time, with the Kryptonite, which then weakens Superman. Bats proposes a trade, hoping to safely receive Dracula's corpse back, but Superman tackles batman out, kniowing that if the kryptonite lands in Luthors hands, he will use it to destroy Sups. they stone flies into the air, and lands in the sack of dust and bones, and somehow begins to recreate the flesh around the bones, and Dracula... is reborn. He lunges at Luthor, who is bitten and turned into the first of Drac's latest fleet of vampires, and Batman and Superman soon realize that in order to stop the Vampiric Plague from spreading throughout Gotham again, and possibly Metropolis, they will have to set aside their differences, and team-up. Dracula soars off to his to Wayne Mansion, remembering his past encounter with the Batman, and Superman isnt too far behind him. Meanwhile, the Luthor vampire keeps Batman busy, attempting to get a taste of Bat's blood. He jumps into the Batmobile, and Luthor lands on top of it, as they hurtle towards the batcave. alfred is ready with an antidote, and warns that two men are flying outside the house, battling. Batman plunges the antidote into Luthor, just as Superman plummets through the cave ceiling, with Dracula below him.Superman is slowly becoming weaker from the Kryptonite within Dracula, and with one last attempt, stabs his hand into Drac's heart, and pulls the chunk of Kryptonite out, Drac's only temporary life-force, and Drac disintegrates once again... Luthor wakes up, in the back of a prisoner van, on its way to Metropolis City, while Clark and his reporter friend, Lois, travel back by train... Batman and Alfred decide to keep Dracula's ashes in a container, hidden deep within one of the many caves within the BAtcave...
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joe_destructive
Legions of Gotham Police Officer
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 14, 2005 1:35:43 GMT -5
o, thank u for that compliment laughingcatsxp! i appreciate it!
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joe_destructive
Legions of Gotham Police Officer
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 14, 2005 1:59:02 GMT -5
Crocs in the Sewers
Famous TV star reporter Vicki Vale is pulled into the sewers through a manhole while reporting on some ordinary topic. as the cameraman bravely follows after, he runs back to the surface, leaving his camera behind, claiming that it was "a giant sewer crocadile!" of course, no one takes him seriously, but Batman realizes that Vicki is in danger, and ventures into the sewers. There, he fails to find Vicki or her abductor, but finds the camera, and takes the tape home to anylyze it. as he puts it on the big screen, he watches the footage, and realizes that the cameraman wasnt kidding. the camera catches sight of Vicki, who is in the arms of the giant reptile, Killer Croc, who grabs the lens-end of the camera, and tosses it into the sewage water, with the sounds of the camera man, and Vicki, screaming for help, followed by that famous texan accent saying, "Don't be afraid Vic, it's me... Don't you remember me?" batman races to the tv news centre, asking the cameraman a bunch of questions, and taking him back down into the sewers, where he leads batman in the direction he saw croc leave. batman continues the path, estimating, until he comes across a pair of crocadiles, guarding a passageway. batman wrestles the crocs, with the cameraman filming everything, and continues into the passage, where Croc jumps out, and tells Batman to leave well enough alone. Vicki runs out, and screams, as croc literally takes a bite at batman, and she grabs the camera, and bashes it on crocs head. "We dont date anymore Waylen! This isnt wat i meant when i said i needed mroe from u! i didnt mean more money and jewelry! especially not STOLEN money and jewelry!" batman turns, confused. croc stumbles away, and screams, "fine! i do all this! just for u! and this is how u repay me!" he aims to ram her with his head, but batman jolts in front of her, with a raised knee, which cracks crocs head, along with bat's knee. theirs a sudden rumbling, and batman looks down the passage, horrified. "the steam! we have to get out NOW!" he grabs Vicki, and the cameraman follows right behind. Croc gets up, and races to the manhole, following them, but slips, and batman watches as he falls down into the sewers again as the scalding jet of steam rips through, hiding croc... Vicki explains that before Waylens condition, she and he used to date. but she then broke it off, after he was first caught stealing a tv from a department store. crocs body is found, but he isnt dead, as his scales took most of the blast, but he is in a coma, apparently from hitting the wall after the steam smashed him into it... the cameraman releases the footage of batman battling the crocadiles, and killer croc, calling the document "The Real Crocadile Wrestler..."
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 14, 2005 7:49:57 GMT -5
You guys are too good they should take your ideas and put them in the cartoon
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 14, 2005 17:38:16 GMT -5
I totally agree with you Riddler! One question joe, Lex Luthor in a heist? Wouldn't it be mor elikely for a henchman or something so that Luthor Corp. doesnt get suspicious? Just IMO Similary origin in meeting with the World's Finest movie but still good
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 14, 2005 18:03:42 GMT -5
Ha, UltimateRiddler thinks I am trying to take his role on LoG he is an awesome Riddler fan but, we are equally matched lol. Just Kidding UltimateRiddler knows allot about Riddler I doubt I can beat him. Anyways great stories guys mine can never compare to that. Keep up the good work . Laughingcatsxp and I will be watching for more results.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 14, 2005 19:28:37 GMT -5
We're like the judges
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