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Post by ayenlou on Sept 6, 2006 22:42:48 GMT -5
So I got into a second round interview for a Sales Consultant job at my school Computer Store. But I first came in interested for a Graphics Designer job. And so I showed them all my wallpaper stuff I made and some creative stuff. But they wanted professional advertisment layouts because that's what Graphic Designers do. So in order to redeem myself for the second interview I wanted to show them that I could do advertisement layouts and get that Graphics Designer job instead of a Sales Consultant. So I made this and I was wondering what ya'll think and give me some constructive criticism to make it an advertisement that's appealing and will attract people to buy the product. And yeah I know there are some touch ups I need to do such as the typo in 'Deluxe' Man-Bat and the glow around Man-Bat. And please don't hate me for putting "Slimmer" Batmobile. I didn't know what else to put. =P Thanks guys!
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Post by The Dark Knight on Sept 6, 2006 23:06:22 GMT -5
The cape seems to drag very unrealistically. You want to catch someone's eye with this. Some of the bats look like ravens and so it might be easier to make them gray and kind of darken the sky the a surly mood.
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Post by ayenlou on Sept 7, 2006 12:28:17 GMT -5
How about something like this....
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Sept 7, 2006 12:35:01 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300] Ooh very nice Ayenlou, I like the Riddler one the best ;D [/shadow]
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Post by ayenlou on Sept 7, 2006 12:43:42 GMT -5
Haha thanks Riddler. But man nothing beats the Riddler Toy Ad that Mattel made a while back. Those ads were freaking killer
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Post by The Dark Knight on Sept 7, 2006 16:10:31 GMT -5
Getting better, but could u possibly try a more navy blue sky? Or gray?
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Post by arkhaminmate on Sept 10, 2006 16:22:29 GMT -5
I think it's great. Although I think you should try to round the cape a bit where it comes downfor the villians, because it just cuts straight down. & you said you put Slimmer Batmobile because you didn't know what to call it. I checked the toy database & it's called "Batman Animated Batmobile." or just The Batmobile.
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Post by Casimir on Sept 11, 2006 9:28:56 GMT -5
It looks good to me, especially the orange one. But then, it's logical and makes sense. And we all know real ads are never logical or make sense! (i.e. identifying mattel figures by numbers insteda of names.) But seriously, I hopes this helps get you the job.
C.
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