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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 11, 2006 22:48:06 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Those Riddles came directly from "BATMAN FOREVER"... and the story reminded me of the movie... ALOT. Good enough though...[/glow]
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 11, 2006 22:54:33 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Those Riddles came directly from "BATMAN FOREVER"... and the story reminded me of the movie... ALOT. Good enough though...[/glow] I think it is great that you wrote one Batfan, but he is right. It was very much like Batman Forever. I do like that he tried to kill the sidekicks though. I had once thought that if I ever had the chance, I would have Riddler kill Joker. Riddler wouldn't be able to stand the fact that he is not the Batman's greatest nemesis. Of course, I would have to be allowed to make it more adult oriented. I thought up a few themes that I can't post on here. More like a gritty realism to my story.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 12, 2006 7:44:25 GMT -5
I liked the story, your welcome All Star . HUSH Riddler, I can't see your pic and yes they are from Batman Forever.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 12, 2006 19:00:40 GMT -5
I know I got this from Batman Forever. I'm not good at making up riddles, so I just used those.
I'll make it up for my next story: "FEAR ITSELF". Starring the SCARECROW!
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 12, 2006 19:32:36 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300]Not if I do first! Lol, just kidding. I'm actually working on a story featuring the Scarecrow, its written to be an episode that introduces him to "The Batman" as a season finale for Season Three. It's called "Fright Night"... It takes place on Halloween[/shadow]
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 12, 2006 19:43:41 GMT -5
[shadow=brown,left,300][glow=orange,2,300]Fright Night
The story starts at Gotham High School, where Barbara Gordon is Prof. Crane’s psychology class.
Crane: So, boys and girls, who knows form last night’s reading how to derive the patient’s worst fear and help them to forget it? Ah, Barbara? Barbara: Umm… Hmmm… Tell the patient to forget about it? Crane: Hfff… No, Barbara. Again, that’s incorrect. (Bell rings.) Everyone, don’t forget tonight’s reading, pages 233-267. BARBARA! Can I see you for a second? Barbara: (Walks over to Crane.) Yes, Professor? Crane: Barbara, you’re failing my class. Why are you so interested in this if you’re failing? Barbara: It’s… part of a profession… I’m interested in. Crane: Really? What is that? Barbara: Um, law enforcement. Crane:…Allow me to try a different procedure to help you… better understand this class. Now, this is the week we’re studying fear. I want to test something on you… (He sprays Barbara with a type of gas.) Feel anything? Barbara: Ah… *coughcough*… Nothing, really, Professor. (Crane holds a spider infront of her.) AEHHHHHH! Crane: How about now? (We see through Barbara’s eyes a hallucination of the spider leaping out of Crane’s hand and growing, growing, growing until it leaps up and BANG. The Dean enters the room.) Dean: Crane! What’s wrong with this student? Why is she screaming?! Crane: I don’t think she likes spiders… Dean: Wait… this is one of your sick experiments again, isn’t it Crane? I warned you about testing on students… You’re fired. Crane: Fired? What do you… how? These students need me!! Dean: Look at what you’ve done to her! She’s cowering in fear! She can’t handle those gases to make her breath! It’s not natural, Crane! It’s just not natural! Crane: I’ll show you unnatural! (Police/campus guards come in and drag Crane away.)
Two months later. Batman is sitting at the Batcomputer, doing stuff.
Alfred: Sir? I thought you headed out an hour ago! Batman: I should’ve, but the bat-wave went off, with a report of a bank robbery. When the police got there, they said they couldn’t get any answers from the witnesses, they were scared out of their wits. Alfred: Really. Perhaps you should investigate. Batman: I plan to but… (Batwave…) Hmm. Another break-in… but this one is at Gotham High School. (Drives off in the Batmobile.)
Batman is cruising along and comes to the school. Just before he enters Batgirl pulls up in a purple and yellow motorcycle.
Batgirl: Pops got it for me for my birthday. Batman: (Long pause.) Nice colors. (They enter.) Batgirl: So, who are we looking for? Batman: I don’t know. (They come to the reception room and find the secretary crouching down in fear.) Are you all right? (Woman looks up in terror and we see two Bat-beasts that look kind of like Man-Bat crossed with vampires.) Woman: AHHH! (Faints.) Batgirl: Wonder what’s bugging her? (They walk forward into the Dean’s office and find two thugs tearing apart the Dean’s office.) Hey, waddaya doing? (They fight, beat-up the thugs and turn around to find… THE SCARECROW. But they don’t know he’s called that though.) Scarecrow: Well DONE Batman… and Batbrat. Batgirl: Hey! Batman: Who are you? Scarecrow: ME? Who am I?! Why, I am your worst nightmare, I am fear incarnate, I am GOTHAM’S TERROR! I AM THE SCARECROW! (Sprays gas into Batman’s face, Batman gasps. He looks into Scarecrow’s face and to him Scarecrow now looks like a monster with maggots and snakes and spiders crawling out of his eyes and mouth and blehhh…) Batman: *Gasp* (he tries to fight off the fact that it is a hallucination, and right before he is about to punch Scarecrow, the Scarecrow’s face becomes the mould of his father’s face, except instead of skin, his face is made of the same material as the Scarecrow’s mask.) *Gasp!* Thomas Wayne: Bruce… Bruce… Bruce… Batman: No… you’re not real… (Batman passes out. He awakens in the Batmobile.) Huh? Where… Batgirl: I got you out at least. What happened in there? You nearly wetted yourself with fear. Batman: What… what happened? Batgirl: Well, you passed out, and then that weirdo Scarecrow guy set the Dean’s office on fire. I put it out luckily, then I found your remote device to the car and I’ve been waiting for you to come around ever since. Batman: Dad… Batgirl: Dad? Batman: My… father… has been dead for a while… I saw his face… I was terrified of him though… Batgirl: Wait, terrified? Batman: Yes… why? Batgirl: I think I know who the Scarecrow is. But I’ll tell you tomorrow… You should get some rest… recover from that gas. (She leaves and hopes back onto the motorcycle and drives off. Batman goes home.)
Overtime Batman’s taking a sample from the Scarecrow’s toxins he found at Gotham High School and working on making an antidote. Batgirl tells Batman one night that Scarecrow is her old psychology professor, Jonathan Crane. Suddenly its Halloween Night (my favorite time of year :-D) and the Batwave goes off. There is a news report with a videotape of Scarecrow saying that if he doesn’t receive $13,000,000 by midnight, he’ll release his gas through the through the air via a bunch of ghost and monster balloons. Batman takes off in his Batmobile and finds Scarecrow. They fight, and Scarecrow is sent to Arkham.
Questions? Comments? Sorry I cut the dialogue short, I couldn’t think of much else to say. I think that unless I write another 3-part epic like “The Batman and the Ultimate Riddle” (or whatever I called it,) I won’t use much dialogue. Anyway, what did you all think? [/glow][/shadow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 12, 2006 19:58:12 GMT -5
Great story Partner I will hero you when an hour passes .
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 13, 2006 7:33:39 GMT -5
Awesome Hush! Apart from the others, this episode sounded like it would come from The Batman
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 13, 2006 21:08:16 GMT -5
"Wartime Part Two"
The GCPD is running into the Gothcorp. Box Factory. Inside they see the green team defeating Batgirl. Eckhardt: "All right boys! Take them out." Batgirl manages to jump out of the way of the gunfire. Killer Croc takes most of the bullets. Two Face pulls out a walkie-talkie. TF: "Riddler, we're going to need some help." R: "The security systems are now on. All exits are sealed. No one can get in or out unless I deactivate the alarm." The scene cuts to Bane and Penguin at the entrance, where it has been sealed by a gigantic steel door. P: "Where do we go from here?" B: "We break the door down!" Bane starts hammering on the door and Penguin pulls out a "torch umbrella". The scene cuts to Batman and the officer Draby getting out of the Batmobile. Justice controls Robin to attack Darby. B: "Robin, get a grip on yourself." Robin starts to fight Batman rather than Darby. All while they talk, they are still fighting. R: "How ironic that you will die at the hand of one of your sidekicks." B: "Amanda, there was a time that I wanted to teach you. So that you could learn to fight for what is right." R: "Bruce? Well I guess it is fitting that we both know who the other is." B: "Why don't you fight me yourself? Are you afraid that you can't defeat me on your own?" J: "Don't try to scare me. After having seen a psychologist, you can't make me afraid of anything." Riddler starts watching this fight from his van. R: "I want everybody hacking into that mind control program. Make sure that it doesn't take affect until Batman is defeated. Black Mask is sitting at a desk. Cluemaster comes running into the room. C: "All of the bombs are in place. In thrity minutes, the top of this building will collapse on itself." BM: "You're going to have to stop those bombs." C: "But why?" BM: "BECAUSE WE ARE LOCKED IN!" C: "I can't stop it. I made it so that there was no turning back." BM: "What are we going to do stategist?" C: "Firefly can melt through an exit. Or Hatter could override the system." BM: "Go with Firefly. He hasn't failed me yet." The scene cuts to Batman. He has just managed to move the fight over to where Justice is controlling Robin. Batman dodges one of Robin's punches and it hits Justice in the face. Justice drops the controller. Batman smashes it with his foot. B: "I guess it is between the two of us now." Riddler executes the hack and orders Robin to stop Bane and Penguin from getting in. Batgirl is inside almost as a spectator to the scene. The police pull out tear gas and start using it. Joker: "Don't cry! Everyone needs to be HAPPY!" Joker sprays the whole squad with his Smilex. Killer Croc and Poison Ivy are passed out. Punch and Judy are on the floor because of the tear gas they inhaled. Two Face: "Let's go." They run upstairs. Batgirl tracks them. The remaining green team enter the room where Firefly is trying to melt out an exit. Also inside is Cluemaster and Black Mask. TF: "There you are. There is no escaping this time around!" Two Face pulls out his coin and flips it. It lands unscathed. TF: "You were dead either way this coin landed. Because both Bullock and Big Bad Harv want to kill you." Two Face pulls his gun out, but Firefly melts it down real quick. Two Face starts pulls out a knife and starts swinging it at Firefly. Cluemaster and Joker start to fight as well. The scene cuts back to Batman. He has just defeated Justice. The Batmobile pulls out a cage and he puts her into it. B: "Darby, can you take care of Riddler?" D: "No problem there." Batman runs toward the entrance where Robin is attacking Bane and Penguin. Penguin is swinging a "sword umbrella" around. Darby runs into the bus and pulls his gun out to Riddler. D: "Freeze! Put your hands into the air!" R: "I figured you would be Yinsy." Darby then escorts Riddler and his followers to the cage that Justice is in. The scene cuts back to the entrance. One time, Penguin, accidentally, hits Bane's cord. In doing so, an explosion goes off. Penguin and Bane are both out cold. The blast took out the door and Robin's mind control chip. Batman and Robin proceed to get the cops and the unconscious green team members out of the building. The scene cut to upstairs, where Batgirl has joined the fight by fighting Cluemaster's henchman. Black Mask manages find an opening. He grabs Firefly and steals his Jetpack. Everyone upstairs is in shock as Black Mask jumps out of the window. Batman calls up to them. B: "There is an opening down here." C: "Everybody RUN!!! There is only a few minutes left before the place BLOWS!! Everyone runs down to try to escape. The scene cuts to right outside where Black Mask has landed. Waiting for him is Mad Hatter. BM: "Where have you been?" MH: "I evacuated before the doors closed." BM: "You COWARD! I needed you." MH: "I think they need you up there. You were the coward. I have a secret. My rabbits are quite functional." All of a sudden Black Mask is surrounded by a few hundred rabbits. They seize him and bring him into back into the factory, where Batman and Robin watch as Batgirl runs out. Firefly and Two Face follow behind Batgirl. Joker and Cluemaster (along with his henchman) are nearing the exit, when the third floor explodes and collapses onto itself. The debris is everywhere. Everyone is out and safe except for those that were in the building. Gordon arrives on the scene. G: "What happened HERE!" B: "War is hell. We apprehended most of the people that were involved. Bane, Two Face, Firefly, Cluemaster, Riddler, Justice, Killer Croc, Poison Ivy, Justice, and Riddler have all been captured thanks to some help by Darby." G: "Wow, I missed a lot. I don't think that you caught Riddler or Justice though." The camera goes to the vacant cage, where a giant peace of building put a good size hole in it. G: "We could use some help from here. To clean this scene up." B: "Sorry, it is daybreak. It is time to get some rest." Batman, Robin, and Batgirl all get into the Batmobile, and go home.
The End
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 13, 2006 23:30:41 GMT -5
"FEAR ITSELF"
We start out with a shadowy figure approaching Gotham riding on a horse. He says, "They all terrorized me as a child. But I'll show them real terror. Beware Gotham. Beware of The Scarecrow!" He then rides into Gotham on his horse.
We go three days later to the Batcave with Bruce investigating the mysterious crimes taking place over the last few days. All the witnesses say they saw something so terrifying that they cowered in fear. The Batwave goes off and then Dick heads up to Bruce. "What's going on?" "The Batwave picked up an alarm at the Gotham Bank." "Let's check it out." "No Dick, I'll handle this myself. You stay here." The Batmobile then runs out the Batcave.
Batman reaches the bank and enters seeing the guards cowering, and cuddled up into a ball. Batman then sees someone putting the money bags in a horse carriage. "You can start with a name." "I am the fear incarnate of Gotham. I am the Scarecrow! And you're the big scary Batman. Let's see what your afraid of." He pulls out some pumpkin bombs and throws them at Batman. Gas releases, but Batman drapes his cape over his face. He runs up and pucnes Scarecrow and he gets knocked down on the floor. Batman grabs him and pulls him up. "Surprise!", Scarecrow says as he sprays gas from his hand in Batman's face. While he's coughing and clearing the smoke, Scarecrow grabs as much money as he can and runs for the rough. Batman gets there and tries to take him out. But before he lands a punch, Scarecrow's face turns into the face of his father. "Dad?" "Bruce, you disappoint me son. Is this what you have to show for your life?" As Batman has this hallucination, Scarecrow hits Batman with the money bags and he falls off the building.
Just minutes before he hits the ground, Robin shows up on a batrope and cathces Batman. He says "You didn't think I'd stay in the cave did you?" He then sees he's sweating refusly, and Robin contacts Alfred. "Alfred, we need the Batmobile stat." The batmobile pulls up and Dick puts Batman inside. He gets in and starts the autodriver, and they get to the batcave. Bruce gets set on the table and starts saying "Father. I'm sorry." Robin tells Alfred about the Scarecrow and his hallucaginic gas. Alfred says Bruce is in no condition to go back out and after observing him, the only way to cure him is to get a sample of the gas and devise an antidote. Robin says he has to do it, but Alfred insists that he is too young for such a dangerous task on his own, but Robin replies: "We don't have a choice! I'm the only one who can stop Scarecrow now! I owe it to Bruce. He took me in when I had no place to go after my parents died. Please." Alfred replies: "Well, if you're going to do this, you'll need some help." He goes and pulls something out from the bat-garage. "We were saving this for you for your birthday, but since it's an emergency." He pulls off the drape, and we see a motorcycle with an R on the side and a bird on the hood. "Whoa!" Dick is amazed by it and checks it out. "We called it the Red Bird." "Thanks Al, now I have to save Gotham and stop Scarecrow." "Uh, master Dick, may you please put on your helmet." He puts on the helmet and heads off to Gotham.
Gordon is shown at the Batsingnal, and while waiting, he hears someone whisper "Jim." He turns around and sees that it's not Batman, but the Scarecrow. As Robin searches around Gotham for him, the Batsingnal turns on, but it's in the shape of a jack o lantern with eyes paited above the Batsingnal and it's colored orange. Robin gets to the top of the building and sees Scarecrow holding Jim Gordon, unconscious. "Well, the Birdboy. I was expecting someone... taller." Scarecrow starts throwing pumpkin bombs and Robin dodges them. To avoid being infected with the toxin, Robin tears off a peace of his cape and ties it over his mouth and nose and goes after Scarecrow. He drops Gordon and he tries to throw a punch at Robin but Robin dodges it and lands one on him. Scarecrow goes to spray the gas out of his hand, but Robin throws a Batarang at it and he himself becomes infected. He then sees Robin as a giant crow and screams out in terror. Robin gets some of his pumpkins and his spray in his arm, takes them to the batcave, Alfred devises an antidote, and all the Scarecrow's victims are cured.
Batman thanks Robin for helping him and stopping Scarecrow. "Let's just call us even," Robin says. Scarecrow gets thrown in Arkham with his new roomate, the Mad Hatter. "Would you like some tea? You could always have more."
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 13, 2006 23:47:44 GMT -5
These stories are good, but I gotta say that HUSH's Scarecrow episode was magnificent. It would be the only one to work in a TB episode but the other plots are awesome. HUSH, you shoul consider ending the part where Scarecrow asks for 13,000,000 dollars or else and make a continuation of when Batman and Batgirl stop it: Like in Batman Begins, make the people already start getting contaminated and they turn on Batman
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 13, 2006 23:49:19 GMT -5
These stories are good, but I gotta say that HUSH's Scarecrow episode was magnificent. It would be the only one to work in a TB episode but the other plots are awesome. HUSH, you shoul consider ending the part where Scarecrow asks for 13,000,000 dollars or else and make a continuation of when Batman and Batgirl stop it: Like in Batman Begins, make the people already start getting contaminated and they turn on Batman What about mine?
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 13, 2006 23:56:01 GMT -5
I've been talking about past stories, not on page 19, I only got up to Hush's, I'll start reading yours
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 14, 2006 1:31:05 GMT -5
I am content that my stories are a little to adult for TB. I find them to be mild in comparison to others I have thought up, but won't post. I would say that some of mine could easily be used for The Batman. Recruiting Reubin could definitely fit into it.
I now have a little bit of free time, so I will get to my Misty Ree story finally. I have a few more planned out and I have my season finale worked out. I have to figure out how many episodes I should do. I think I'll write a Scarecrow episode, seeing as how it is very popular these days. I have to write my Harley Quinn story too. I have a lot to do.
As far as reviews, Fright Night was quite amusing. The high school that Barbara goes to seems more like a college. I did like that Crane was a teacher that experimented on his students. The plot was a good mix of revenge and ransom. Overall, a well written story.
Fear Itself, those pumpkin bombs reminded me of Hob Goblin. Scarecrow on a horse was a good little reminder of Batman Begins. Scarecrow really didn't have much motivation. It never really explained why except with that beginning. I think that would have been more appropriate as a revelation at the end of the episode. The Scarecrow signal was really neat.
I look forward to more stories from both of you. I think my favorite Scarecrow episode that I have read on here was Joe's.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 14, 2006 12:59:26 GMT -5
Good story All Star Batman, similar with the Thomas Wayne parody but I liked the addition with Robin, not doing what he was told and smart talking Batman when he rescues him then notifces he's ill, it reminds me of Batgirl in this series. Really liked it
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 14, 2006 16:51:37 GMT -5
Thanks Laughing Cats. I really thought it would be cool for a Robin story where he takes care of things.
My next story will be called "LOST SOUL". Starring the real SOLOMON GRUNDY. Let me just say this will be my version of the "Born on A Monday" story to be told in THE BATMAN STRIKES!#19.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 14, 2006 17:30:25 GMT -5
I loved both of your stories I might be making one soon as well. Of course you know who it will be staring ;D I just love to write stories it's just hard to sometimes. Here is a hero All Star I gave Dark Nightwing one yesterday and I will again today.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 14, 2006 22:48:50 GMT -5
Can I get some indepth feedback on my story? Or how about the entire story arc of Black Mask and Justice.
Monday, I'll write my Misty Ree story. After that is Scarecrow, and then the season finale. This will make my season a grand total of 15 episodes. After I have written them all, I'll cut, paste, and edit the entire season onto one giant post. I am going to use this as a way to do a second draft, because I forgot to do a few things. I want to add a few subplots, and have more involvement from Alfred. I may describe some things a little more indepth as well. It will be worth reading them all as one post, and it will be a little different the second time around.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 14, 2006 22:51:00 GMT -5
I'll start looking into your stories tomorrow ASAP Dark Nightwing, I can't wait to hear your Misty Ree story, I know it's gonna be good
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 15, 2006 3:36:38 GMT -5
hello... this is one of the only chances i have to go on the computer, caus mine is being repaired... i love these stories! iv appaerently missed ALOT! but iv caught up, i like that scarecrow episode, the one where crane gasses barbara, personally, but i would enjoy hearing how bats beat scarecrow... it got cut short a bit! but i love them all! i was going to do a solomon grundy one too, but i figured id wait to see iss#19, to see wat he's like... i was gonna call mine "Monday, Monday", and in it, batman would start out bein bashed by killer croc, knocked into the sewers, and left unconcious. from ther, he wakes up, upside down, facing an ugly grey human-like... thing(Soloman of course!). bats breaks down from being tied to the ceiling of the sewers, and soloman gets all mad, and pulls bats' cape, as he lunges for the passageways, and bats it thrown back into a wall... (aw, i might as well go into detail while i can, i dont know when i'll be able to get back on) grundy lifts bats up, far from the sewer floor, and shouts, right in his face, saliva flying, "SOLOMON GRUNDY! BORN ON A MONDAY!" batman freaks out as he realizes its the swamp zombie, the REAL one, and he starts scrambling, but solomon swings his cape this way and that, pummeling bats all over the place. its not long after that bats ' cape finally rips, and he makes a break for it, in time to get away, and up to the surface... he finally gets back to the batcave, half-dead in his car, and alfred freaks out, as he's NEVER seen a beating this bad, and bruce is hospitalized for 5 days... when he finally gets out, he tells alfred about the swamp zombie, and to his suprose, alf believes him. it turns out that non other than killer croc has been using "an albino-like beast-human" to assist him in his crimes, posibbly using the sewers as escape routes. batman prepares to battle, against alfreds advice, and he grabs for the batbot, but collapses as he tries to crawl in. batgirl, in the meantime, begins her own rounds, and comes across a heist by kiler croc, and his albino-beast-friend, and she freaks out, as she realizes that she cant handle either of them on her own. she tries to contact batman by using the batsignal, but she's almost caught when her dad(who has forbidden her to be batgirl as it is) walks up onto the rooftop to see who turned the light on. she decides to attempt to tackle the beastly pair of villains on her own, and swings down, just as they're making off with their spoils, and inturrupts them. "Stay out of this kid! by the looks of ya, yer gonna last NO chance 'gainst my buddy Solomon 'ere! Save this game for the big boys!" croc shouts out, but as he finishes, he is kicked in the head, by a red boot, and he looks up in time to see a teenager, maybe late teens, richocheting off crocs head, onto the wall, and soaring his fist into solomons face. as he makes contact, he shrieks, and solomon looks down at him, confused, unpained by his punch. croc, on the other hand, stumbles around, and batgirl swings her foot out, tripping him, and he plu mmets down the manhole, hitting his head on the rim. solomon turns, and attempts to smash batgirl out of the way, but misses, and his hand gets caught in the manhole, and as he pulls, he tears up several feet of the concrete street. batgirl flips up, onto his head, and lands her feet on his shoulders. she attempts to poke his eyes, and he simply somersaults, almost crushing her, and is unfazed. "SOLOMON GRUNDY! BORN ON A MONDAY!"(again, saliva all over batgirl) Robin, yes "the mysterious OTHER vigialnte mentioned in "Riddled with Bullets", known as The Teen Wonder, who has just broken his fist on solomons face, struggles upwards, and accidentally drops a flare gun from his belt, and a flare goes off, blazing right at grundy, who freaks out as it lands near him. his face totally changes from plain old annoyed, to out right freaked, and he tries to stomp it out, but it catches his pants on fire. batgirl, looks to grundy, shocked, but takes advantage of the situation, and asks, "Where's Crocs hideout?!" he responds, "Grundy... no know where croc is... born on a monday... DONT KNOW!" Batgirl, shouts out, yes, a little humor, if at all, "Liar liar, pants on fire!" grundy, then flings himself off a cliff, right down into the shore, right where a sewage pipe is spilling out water, and batgirl jsut BARELY manages to land a battracer on his leg. as she turns back to see who helped her, she discovers the fellow vigialnte has up and vanished. batgirl decides to follow the tracer, and follows down into the sewer system, following for almost an hour, until it the batwave thing starts beeping, and she realises that shes right next to the tracer. she feels deep breathing down her neck, and turns in time to see a meaty arm spring from the shadows, crushing her into a wall. its then that thers a whirring noise, and the batboat appears, speeding down the sewege water, and maims grundy, or trying to, crumpling the boat, and bats bails in time to see the boat catch fire, and grundy freaks again, and pummels the ceiling, crawling up to the surface, sending chunks of concrete down on the duo. batman covers batgirl from the rubble, but he's still in pain! they both get out, and follow the albino beast up into a large factory of some sort. they see grundy crawlin a wall, literally, smashing his bare hands and feet into the metal wall, and as he reaches the top, the familiar red and green costumed vigilante appears, landing on grundy's back. batman tosses an exploding batarang, and Robin flips back off grundy's back, away from the explosion, and grundy flips again(SOLOMON GRUNDY BORN ON A MONDAY!), and he tackels robin into a wall. as he does, the railing thing their on begins creaking under grundy's wait, but intsead of collapsing the whole thing, the floor just under grundy breaks through, and he plummets right on to the conveyer belt, leading who-knows where. thers a large stamping machine ahead, but as it smashes down on grundy, it breaks in half, and falls apart, sparking electricity, and causing the machine to jam and catch fire (SOLOMON GRUNDY! blah blah blah, etc!) and soon enough, the whole place is ablaze, and batmn and batgirl both lift Robin, who's unconcious, and bring him outside. batgirl races back in an attempt to save grundy, but bats pulls her back just as the whole factory expldes, and robin is shaken awake. "NO!" batgirl shouts, and batman assures her thers nothing they can do... robin attempts to make a break for it, but bats catches his mini cpae, and yanks him back. "And who are you?" batman asks, suprisingly calmly, staring into robins eyes... "Im Robin..." and so they learn his name... that scene cuts ther, but much later, when the fires all out, and the building is char, the smaera follows down into the hole from the sewer pipes, and it goes into the deep blackness of the shadows, and all you hear, very quietly, is, "Solomon Grundy... Born on a Monday..."
see, the only probs with this would be that a) i have no idea wat grundy will be like in the series, b) bats meets him in #19, but he would be like, suprised in this one, when he first spots him... that could be changed, my beginning i mean... he could be all like, "Grundy? NO!" before he gets pummeled around... oh, and c) in case your wonering how bats found btgirl, im just gonna say he can trace batgirls tracer too, caus it really is... his. as for how ROBIN found them, i'll say he followed, or through his own tracver on grundy!
anyways, i may not type again for a while, great sories everybody! hows mine?
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 15, 2006 13:39:38 GMT -5
These stories are good, but I gotta say that HUSH's Scarecrow episode was magnificent. It would be the only one to work in a TB episode but the other plots are awesome. HUSH, you shoul consider ending the part where Scarecrow asks for 13,000,000 dollars or else and make a continuation of when Batman and Batgirl stop it: Like in Batman Begins, make the people already start getting contaminated and they turn on Batman What about mine? Personally, All Star, I thought your scarecrow story was better then mine, you're scarecrow had a theme, (I.E., creepy jack-o'-lanturns, the horsecarage, a very headless horseman theme.) My scarecrow wasn't that theme related. Here's a hero, I admit defeat!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 15, 2006 13:41:59 GMT -5
Great Stories since I have heroed All Star and Dark Nightwing here is one for you partner. I just read yours Joe_Destructive and I will hero you when an hour passes, great job!
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 15, 2006 21:02:44 GMT -5
"LOST SOUL"
This story starts off with Batman chasing Ragdoll through Gotham after he robs a jewelry store. Trying to escape, Ragdoll goes down a sewer grate with narrow bars on it. Batman then tries to pull it off. While he's doing that, Ragdoll keeps running through the sewer, and he bumps into something and falls. He looks up and is terrified at what he sees. Batman then gets down to the sewer and Ragdoll then comes up running and bumps into Batman. "Take me back to prison! I'll give back the diamonds! Don't let him get me!" Batman is shocked at this and asks Ragdoll, "What did you see?" Ragdoll just babbles out of control and faints. Batman then goes down the tunnel and he's shocked at what he sees. Solomon Grundy.
"I thought you we're back in Arkham Clayface, but I guess I'll have to put you back there." He then runs up to Grundy and gives him a punch in the face. Batman then pulls his hand back and holds it in pain. "Solomon Grundy Born on A Monday." No matter how hard he hits Grundy, nothing phases him. "I'm getting the feeling this isn't Clayface. But then that means..." Before he can finish, Grundy grabs Batman by head and just slams him into the walls and ceilings. Batman starts running and throws some flash bombs at Grundy. And makes his escape. He gets out of the sewer with Ragdoll, calls the Batmobile and heads back to the cave. "Alfred,come in Alfred." "Yes Master Bruce?" "We may have a big problem on our hands." "How big sir?" "It's Solomon Grundy. The REAL Solomon Grundy." "Are you sure sir? The last time you fought Grundy it was merely Clayface in disguise." "I fought him Alfred. No matter what I did nothing fased him. And it wasn't anyone in a costume or makeup. This is the real deal." "Good Lord!" "I'm heading back to the Batcave to get the secret weapon." "I'll go prep it sir."
Meanwhile, Solomon Grundy arrises from the sewer and starts tearing Gotham apart. Then Batman shows up in the Batbot. He and Grundy do battle all over the city. It turns out not even the Batbot is strong enough to take down Grundy, as he rips it apart one piece at a time. He then opens the control cockpit and pulls Batman out and rams him hard into the ground. Then, Gotham PD show up with everyone armed. Gordon orders them to hold their fire until he gives the order.
As Grundy is about to destroy the Batman, he says "Solomon Grundy, born on a Monday." Then Batman says, "Christened on a Tuesday." "HMMP?" "Wed on a Wednesday, Took ill on Thursday, Got worse on Friday, Died on Saturday, Buried on Sunday." Grundy then calms down and sits down. "Good." Gordon say,"Arms down, it's over." But it isn't.
We then get a sniper vision with the target set on Grundy. Then, *BANG!*, Solomon Grundy is shot in the head and is dead again. Batman then spots the sniper and catches him. He pulls off his helmet and it's Chief Rojas! Batman brings Rojas to Gordon and says this is the one who shot him. Gordon: "What the hell is wrong with you Rojas?! I gave a direct order to hold fire, and you disobeyed! Turn in your badge, you're fired!" Rojas: "Fired? After all I did for this city, you have the nerve to fire me? I did this for the good of the city. This city's becoming the home of freaks!" "What are you saying?" "'m saying that ever since the Batman showed up in Gotham, we've had nothing but freaks in this city ever since he brought down Thorne. Joker, Penguin, Riddler, the list goes on! Here's my f**king badge! I've had it with this city."
Rojas then walks off. "Do you think what he says is right? "Do you think ever since you arrived, this is why psychopaths like Joker and Penguin are here?" "I've asked myself that before. It doesn't matter. You and I have to protect this city from whatever dangers it. Freak or mobster, we have to save Gotham." Batman then shoots a Batgrapple and leaves.
Later at the Gotham Morgue, where they're doing the autopsy on Grundy, the hand moves and Grundy lives again! And he screams real loud: "SOLOMON GRUNDY! BORN ON A MONDAY!"
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 15, 2006 22:49:11 GMT -5
good story! im bak on the computer, at my uncle's. so this is my chance to type. of course, it is a little to... graphic for the show, with solomon grundy being shot in the head... rojas' f*cking badge... other than that, its good!
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joe_destructive
Legions of Gotham Police Officer
My Kingdom of Cards... Has fallen to shards...
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 15, 2006 23:04:03 GMT -5
u know who id like to write about? the toy maker... he sounds really interesting, and if he's anything like the animated Superman shows Toyman, then hed be awesome! i thot toyman was creepy and neat... not quite like his comic book self...
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 15, 2006 23:06:38 GMT -5
Glad you liked it joe.
What did you guys think of my story?
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 15, 2006 23:10:04 GMT -5
u know who id like to write about? the toy maker... he sounds really interesting, and if he's anything like the animated Superman shows Toyman, then hed be awesome! i thot toyman was creepy and neat... not quite like his comic book self... When does that episode debut? I am eager to see what this new character is about.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 16, 2006 13:33:13 GMT -5
I'd love to see Toymaker, he looked awesome!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 16, 2006 18:41:51 GMT -5
"Misty Ree"
This episode starts out with Batman at the end of one of Riddler's games. The setting is the inside of building, in an old abandoned apartment complex. R: "How did you get past all of my riddles? I made them nearly impossible. Between the diversion, the gondola, the framing, you couldn't have gotten past everything!" B: "It is just you and me now Riddler. None of your helpers are here to save you. Your cane is broken, so there won't be any computer hacking today. Now I have a riddle for you. 'What is the Riddler without a computer or henchman?' Just another guy." R: "No... no...NO!! I am a mystery. I am a genius. I am the smartest person alive." B: "If that were true, then why would you leave clues to every crime that you have ever committed? And how come I continue to catch you?" R: "I will show you I am more than you know. I will show you that I am a GOD!" Riddler snaps the top off of his broken cane and jumps out the window. He uses his cane as a zipline to a nearby powerline outside. Batman goes to follow him, but Riddler throws the piece of cane at the powerline. The powerline starts to fall and there is an old man in a walker underneath it. Batman jumps down to save the man, and just barely succeeds. Batman looks of into the distance to see Riddler in his Question-car speeding off. B: "It's never easy." The screen goes black and says "A FEW MONTHS LATER". Barbara is in class, asleep. The bell rings and she wakes up suddenly. She walks out of class and into the halls. She is joined by her friend, Darla. D: "So Bar, that class was a snooze fest. I could tell that you agree." B: "I need to start staying awake for Biology, or I'm going to fail." D: "Relax, I fell asleep too. Old man Herman puts everyone to sleep." Another girl joins them. "Hey, have you all heard about this teenage girls club?" B: "I must have slept through that." D: "I heard about that. It sounds like fun. They have all kinds of games there. It has a study group too. At least that is what I've heard." B: "I could really use a study group. When is it?" The other girl starts talking again: "Here is a pamphlet." She hands Barbara the pamphlet (go figure). The scene cuts to Batman and Batgirl on a stake out. BG: "Wow, I had no idea stake-outs were so boring." BM: "Something has been going on lately. I can't explain it. This place is going to be robbed tonight." BG: "How do you know? Do you just have your fingers crossed or..." BM: "I just know." BG: "Well, I can't do any stake out tomorrow. I have a girls club thing I am going to try out." BM: "Girls club? Is that some kind of support group?" BG: "I don't think so. I need a support group for staying awake." BM: "You're the one that wanted to go on a stake out." BG: "This isn't what I had in mind." The scene cuts to Batman and Batgirl returning to the Batcave. BG: "Well that was a... (she's yawning) waste of time." BM: "It'll be hit tomorrow." BG: "Don't you mean today?" They look out at the rising sun. The scene cuts to Barbara attending the girls club with Darla. B: "So when is this thing going to start?" A woman approaches a podium. D: "I think it is starting right now." The woman starts talking into the microphone. "Welcome! I am so happy to see so many girls here. Here at the Teenage Women Club, we look forward to giving young women such as yourself some direction in life. We will teach you anything that you would like to know about anything." Barbara whispers to Darla: "The answer to anything? I have a computer at my friends house that really can answer anything. The speaker continues: "We would like to show you a video. Please come into our full length movie theater. B: "Wow, they didn't spare any expense." All of the girls go into the movie theater. Barbara sits down in her seat and falls asleep. When she wakes up, the movie is over. She looks over at Darla, but she is looking as though she is in a trance. B: "I fell asleep again. I can't stay up for anything. Darla? You okay?" The lights come back on and the speaker comes out again: "You are all one of us now. If you have anymore questions, please ask me. My name is Misty Ree. You can call me Misty. Now, commence the mission!" B: "What mission?" The whole crowd starts to run out the door. Barbara is caught up in the middle and can't get out. They keep running until they get to their destination. It is the same place that they had done a stake out of the night before. Batman is watching from a rooftop. Barbara notices and starts screaming for him. Batman uses his grapple to swing over the crowd. Barbara puts her hand in the air and Batman lifts her from the center of the group. BM: "So this is that thing you were talking about. Get changed, we have some work to do." Batman and Batgirl go down to try to stop all of the girls. They underestimate the girls and don't eve get into stop them. One of the girls is injured in the process, but she just keeps on limping. Batman and Batgirl limp over to the Batmobile. The girls head back to the club. Meanwhile, Riddler is giving a speech to the rest of the club. R: "You will follow me in pursuit against the evil entitity. The reason no one has defeated them, was because they thought they were the good guys. Evil is the police force and Batman. Follow me to defeat the evil of the world and take what they have stolen from us. Are there any questions?" One girl in the back starts jumping up and down with her hand up. She then says: "Oh, can I get an autograph? Please Mr. Riddler! I lover you!" She is wearing a shirt that has four question marks on it. R: "Query! Echo! Get that girl out of here. She isn't one of us." The girl starts screaming: "Please Mr. Riddler! Just a signed photo or something. I'm good at riddles. Ask me anything." She continues talking all the way until she is thrown out of the door. The girls return. Misty Ree starts carrying the limping girl. MR: "Oh great leader, will you heal one of our own?" The leg is by now, in really bad shape. R: "She needs to see a doctor. She could die from that." MR: "But you are all powerful. You should be able to heal her. You are our prophet." R: "Send her to a doctor." Misty Ree turns around and starts to walk away. Then she grabs Riddler's new cane and starts hitting him with it. MR: "He is a false prophet. We must not follow this man anymore. We shall start a search of the prophet." Batman and Batgirl arrive. They begin to fight there way toward Misty Ree. Eventually, Batgirl accidentally spilled some water on one of the girls. The girl woke up from the brain wash. She informs Batman and he lights a match. The sprinklers go off. Misty Ree is not affected though. She attacks and is ultimately defeated. Batman recovers Riddler, who is in a daze. Riddler starts saying all kinds of riddles, except he messes them up. BM: "So you think you are a genius... or a god." R: "I am a god. I am a god. Smartest person of alive. I am a smart as a person. God, a I am."
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 16, 2006 18:47:23 GMT -5
What did you guys think of my Solomon Grundy story?
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