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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 7, 2006 18:01:14 GMT -5
Just read yours Joe_Destructive it was awesome!!! I am thinking of a story right now I can't wait to see your story Laughingcats .
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 7, 2006 20:00:27 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300] We pick up at the police department, and who is there but the greatly missed DETECTIVE ELLEN YIN! (cheering) She sits at her desk working on the Riddler crime spree. Batman comes in through the window. Det. Yin: Long time no see. Batman: Missed you too. Det. Yin: What brings you around here? Batman: Info, on the Riddler. Det. Yin: Seems the last two times we ran into him he had taken an interest in the both of us. Batman: Yes, but I checked all of Joker's previous hideouts, and all joke shops and stand-up comedy clubs. Nothing. Riddler kidnapped Joker. Det. Yin: That would make sense, they've always hated each other. Batman: remember how Riddler functions? He hides his clues in what he regularly says... the fourth of August... four months from now... Something I don't get... Det. Yin: So if you've already figured that out, then why are you really here? Batman:...I'm not the only one who's wrecked his plans before... neither is the Joker... Det. Yin: So you think Riddler is after me next? Batman: Today of all days... it's the 22nd. Det. Yin: Why the 22nd? Batman: Because... there were two Detectives who solved his cleverest conundrums. Det. Yin: That's clever of you, Batman... but I'm on my way to my mothers... it's her birthday. But if I ever need you, I know your number. (Pulls out the Bat-communicator from her drawer.) Police Headquarters, April 26th Riddler barges into Det. Yin's office. She looks up, gasps, and secretly opens up her drawer and presses the button on the Bat-tracking-device-thingy. Riddler: Yinsee... It HAS been a long time, hasn't it? Yin: What do you want, Riddler? Riddler: I've come to reveal my next clue to all of Gotham... and YOU'RE going to help me... (Batman crashes through the window) Oh, dear, dear me... Don't you know how to make a less messier enterance? But this is a good thing, I now have both, the two detectives whom have thwarted me time and time again. These two detectives! Two detectives... yes this is a treat. Why don't you both come with us my double-Ds? Batman: (Gives unaproving look) I don't think so. Riddler: The Riddler guessed you would say that, which is why I have set enough gunpowder beneith Gotham Police Headquarters to leave Gotham with her very own crater. So what will it be, detectives? Batman: Where are you taking us? (Riddler gives evil grin) Scene opens with Riddler at Gotham Database, standing infront of a camera. Riddler: Hello, Gotham. It's time for your most favorite gameshow, Riddler's Revenge. Our first contestant was the ever happy JOKER! (Camera shows Joker in a cell being zapped by Riddler's men with tasers, him yelling out in protest) Now, we have a duo of detectives, making today a very special day indeed. Here is the riddle for today: I've been here since I was born, and I keep getting bigger and better, and I'll be there when you die. What am I? Batman: Riddler, you're nuts. Riddler: I'm genius. I'm unstoppable. Boys, take care of them. Keep what we came for, throw out the garbage. (The Riddler's henchwoman tasers him HARD and everything goes black). Batman awakens in the Batcave. Batman: Al...fred...? Alfred: Oh, you're awake. Batman: Riddler... Alfred: I found you out behind the Power Plant, lucky really I was there. I was dropping off some scrap medal that Wayne Enterprises usually donates... Batman: (Runs to his computer) The Riddler attacked Yin and me today, on the 26th... called us the Detective-Duo... double Ds... Alfred: Would this suggest sir that there are two Ds in his name? Today is the 26th, I'd be willing to guess that they are the 2nd and 6th letters of his name... and perhaps because he captured Joker on the fourth... perhaps J is the fourth letter to his... enigma. Alfred: Yes, sir, this is quite an enigma. Batman: No, the day he kidnaped Joker he called it the first part of his E-nigma... and it was on the 4th... that must mean that E is the first letter to his name! Alfred: And E is the fourth letter to Joker's name. Batman: Well, if we've cracked the system correctly, we'll need to keep an eye out for clues. Have the Bat-computer compile a list of names of the victims and their capturing dates... I want all of this stored in the memory so we don't loose track. Alfred: Right sir. But what of the Riddles he broadcasts to all of Gotham. Batman: Their either throw offs, or part of his puzzle. June 9th. Bruce Wayne and Mayor Grange are presenting a veterian's memorial to Gotham City. Bruce: Wayne Enterprises is glad to present this magnificent memorial to our proud Gotham City. And now, I would like to present Gotham's own war veteran, Mayor Grange! (Applause) Grange: Thank you. It is my proud pleasure to have this magnificant statue overlooking harbor and sea of our fair Gotham City... (speakers are taken over) Riddler: No, it is MY fair pleasure to rid this city of such an eyesore! (The ground rumbles beneith and the statue sinks into the ground, and in it's place a giant marble question mark rises in its place.) Such ancient history no one cares for! Its time I take this artifact to where he belongs! (The Riddler's men come out of no where and grab Mayor Grange and leap down the hole to where the memorial sank.) Grange: Bruce! Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeee![/shadow] Okay this is part two, I know it's not as good as part one, but I promise it will all come together in part three. I also apologize for providing no cliffhanger like part one. Keep reading, part 3 should be posted by monday.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 7, 2006 20:34:32 GMT -5
"Wartime Part One" (if you can think of a better title, let me know)
Robin awakens. He is handcuffed inside the trunk of a moving car. He starts wiggling to get to his utility belt, but realizes it is gone. Bane and Justice (she is now in her costume) are talking. J: "So what do you say?" B: "You broke me out and you want me to fight of Joker because he stole from me. I want to get paid for my services." J: "Don't cross me! I have a little insurance. When I gave you the venom intake device, I slipped a very small bomb into it. All I have to do is touch a button, and you will not only be blown to pieces, but you'll not be able to use anymore venom. Your body can't live without it anymore. Withdrawal would be a much worse death than being blown up. Even in prison, you had to inject small doses in order stay alive." Penguin (who is driving): "You didn't set up anything like that for me... did you?" J: "No, I figured that you were pathetic enough to not even need insurance. You could kill us right now, but you don't have the guts. Look at you, freak! What is it that keeps you breathing. If I were you, I would have killed myself a long time ago." It cuts to Robin in the trunk, listening in. Then it cuts to Penguin slamming on the brakes. Robin: "OW." P: "One more remark and I'll kill you." He pulls out an umbrella. J: "Quiet, he is awake." The back seat comes down so that Robin can see them. J: "Morning sunshine." R: "Where did the girl go?" J: "She was pathetic. We decided to take a hostage. She was the hostage. Such a pretty young girl. We used a new mind control device that allows us to talk through her. We plan on doing the same to you." R: "Why are you telling me this?" J: "So that when you wake up with blood all over you, you'll know who to thank." R: "I won't!" Robin kicks the trunk open. When it pops open, the Kabuki Twins jump out of the car and use their blades to keep the trunk closed. P: "The kid has spirit." The screen cuts to the bus outside Gothcorp. Box Factory. Punch and Judy (now in the superhero outfits, except they have been repainted to be green) get out of the bus first. A security system goes off. Hundreds of robot rabbits come out of the factory. TF: "Riddler, can you take these guys out?" R: "They improved the coding quite significantly. You all have got stall them." I: "Nature is stronger than anything that mankind has come out with." She grows many different trees and has them attack the rabbits. The scene cuts to inside the factory, where Black Mask, Cluemaster, and Mad Hatter are all watching the scene. BM: "Well strategist, what plan do you have?" C: "We call in the new Police Chief. Eckhardt." BM: "Do it!" Cluemaster goes to call him. Hatter and Black Mask continue to watch the scene. BM: "I came up with my own strategy. When I recruited Justice, I had to make sure she wouldn't turn on me. So I hired someone." The scene below shows Firefly out there, setting Ivy's trees aflame. I: "You'll pay for that." She makes a tree come up behind him and bash him on the head. As he is falling though, he sets that tree on fire as well. The scene cuts to Joker attacking the rabbits with his acid. Punch and Judy are just bashing the ones they have with a "bat". The Batmobile arrives at the scene. Out comes Batgirl, but Batman is not with her. TF: "Look, it's the little one!" He pulls out his coin. It lands unscathed. R: "Croc, go get her, gator!" Batgirl starts to have to dodge his gigantic fists. The scene cuts Batman investigating Blackgate Prison. He finds a piece of fabric that went to Robin's cape. Catwoman is in a cell, watching him. Batman realizes that she is there. B: "What happened here?" C: "Sorry cat's got my tongue." B: "TELL ME!" C: "I love it when there angry. I could tell you anything you want to know. Let me out, and I will tell you anything. Cats don't belong in cages." B: "No, but you do. If you come help me, I'll let you out." C: "I don't play like that. You scratch my back, I think about scratching yours." B: "Fine." He sets her free. C: "They took him. Bane, Penguin, and some girl that I had never seen before. I didn't know the kid could fight so well. If only he were a little bit older." B: "Which way did they go?" C: "They said something about going to meet at a factory." Batman is stunned. B: "Gothcorp. Box Factory!" Batman runs out and goes into his batboat. He gets onto police radio. B: "Be on the lookout for a car with Penguin and Bane in it." A voice responds: "Just spotted the vehicle in question. I am now in pursuit." The scene cuts to the car Robin is in. P: "Looks like we got a copper behind us." One of the Kabuki Twins jumps onto the car, while the other keeps the trunk closed. The scene cuts back to Batman. B: "Where is the car?" Police: "AHHH! What is that thing? We are approaching a crossroads of Dark Avenue and Victory Street. I need backup." Batman approaches the city and hits an eject button. The whole top of the boat pops off and is now a small Batmobile. Batman catches up to the police chase. Over the radio, someone voices: "Calling all cars. Calling all cars. Disregard that police chase. All units are needed at Gothcorp. Box Factory. This is police chief Eckhardt speaking." B: "We need a unit on this chase." E: "I'm calling the shots not you." The police car is starting to look like mulch. Batman puts the Batmobile on autopilot and jumps onto the police car to fight the Kabuki Twin. At this point, Penguin is long gone. Batman manages to defeat the Kabuki Twin, but loses the car." Police officer: "Thank you so much. I don't know how I can repay you." B: "I have to go down that Box Factory." PO: "Please let me come with you. I could help. Plus, I don't want to be stranded on Dark Ave. at this time of night." B: "Come with me." The scene cuts to Batgirl, trying to fight Croc. Ivy and Firefly are still in an intense fight. Two Face pulls out a machine gun and starts taking out the rabbits. R: "I think that I have it under control." All the rabbits stop moving instantly. The scene cuts to Black Mask watching the events. BM: "When are these police supposed to arrive? It seems Hatter has failed again." Hatter begins to cry. The police do arrive. E: "Shoot to kill the following: Joker, Riddler, Two Face, Killer Croc, Punch, Judy, and Poison Ivy. Everyone else is to be left alone." The green team is now inside the factory (minus Riddler and his followers). Batgirl is now is inside, up in the raftors. She attacks Poison Ivy and manages to knock her out before anyone knows what is going on. Firefly is outside and fly's up to where Black Mask is. BM: " You will be our way out Firefly. Strategist! Is everything in place?" C: "This place is set to collapse on the them." BM: "You better tell the police not to come in. Wait, it appears that will prove difficult." Justice arrives down at where the police are. J: "Well look at all the cops! Bane! Penguin! Go take them out! I'm going to experiment with my new toy." She pulls out a controller. Robin starts moving. J: "Time to play." Batman arrives at the scene. He sees Robin fighting all of the police officers. B: "What is going on?" The scene cuts to Batgirl inside, fighting Joker, Croc, and Punch and Judy. Two Face just sits back and watches the scene while flipping his coin repetitively. E: "All police officers go inside. Robin has betrayed us." The episode ends with a few seconds of what each character is doing at the end.
To Be Continued...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 7, 2006 20:54:20 GMT -5
I loved your story UltimateRiddler here is a hero I am very impressed on your well planned clues I am quite shocked by your knowledge. Great story now I shall read yours dark Nightwing
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 7, 2006 23:04:05 GMT -5
Loved both stories
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 7, 2006 23:04:29 GMT -5
Sorry guys, been ultrabusy visiting elders for meetings and such so never got to psot around anymore
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 7, 2006 23:06:41 GMT -5
No problem LaughingCats by the way I made another riddle post it's called Riddler's Revenge. Loved both stories as well you all!!! Bring on the conclusion.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 7, 2006 23:26:11 GMT -5
Yeah onto Clayface and Two-Face for me...
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 8, 2006 0:08:44 GMT -5
I am currently thinking of ten stories with 10 villains for them. Be on the lookout for them. The villains I will feature will be: Riddler, Scarecrow, Solomon Grundy, Catwoman, Penguin, Calendar Man, Joker, Mr. Freeze, Poison Ivy, and Two-Face. In that order.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 8, 2006 0:10:48 GMT -5
cool looking forward to them all star
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joe_destructive
Legions of Gotham Police Officer
My Kingdom of Cards... Has fallen to shards...
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 8, 2006 2:03:06 GMT -5
hey guys, my internet went all haywire along with my computer, so i havent been able to read your stories... and wats that about submitting these plots? thta sounds intriguing!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 8, 2006 9:52:17 GMT -5
Welcome back Joe_Destructive we missed you Anyways I haven't heard about that I'd like to know as well.
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 8, 2006 19:23:53 GMT -5
NOOOO! BLAST DAMN! MY WRITING! I JUST FINISHED PART 3 AND THEN I COMPUTER FROZE!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! I'M SO SORRY EVERYONE! AHHHHHHHH!
I'm very sorry but due to stupid computers and slow internet connections I will not be posting part 3 of my story until further notice. I'm going off to either cry or beat something up. I'll post by Saturday...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 8, 2006 19:35:40 GMT -5
Awww dang. Its okay man that happens to us all, can't wait to read your story though the suspense is killing me along with Riddler comes out the 11th!
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 8, 2006 20:00:15 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300]*Cry cry sniff sniff sob sob*Thanks partner here's a hero for being such a good friend IT WAS SUCH A GOOD ENDING TOO!!![/shadow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 8, 2006 20:27:26 GMT -5
No problem it's what I do, make people feel better. The ending might be long to write but, if you write it in Microsoft word it might not freeze without saving it. That is a pretty good story so I will hero you to make you feel better . It might take an hour though I just heroed Laughingcats.
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 8, 2006 22:06:10 GMT -5
OKAY! After 9 cups of coffee to calm me down (my hands are still shaking) I'm going to attempt to rewrite part 3 of my story which I finally thought up a cool (yet cheesy) title for. I'm calling the movie "The Batman and THE ULTIMATE RIDDLE". Pray this makes the board this time...
[shadow=green,left,300][glow=green,2,300]Bruce Wayne is sitting at his desk in his office, the camera shooting from behind his back showing an Instant Message conversation between him and Alfred about the Ridddler, when Derwyn Dagma enters his office. Derwyn: Mr. Wayne? (Bruce doesn't look up)Mr. Wayne? Bruce: OH! Sorry Derwyn. What's up? Derwyn: I have the prototype of the memory erasure device you requested, for the specialized training of dogs, sir. Bruce: Oh good. Show it to me? (Derwyn and Bruce go down to the development room.) Derwyn: Well Mr. Wayne, I was a little surprised that you requested my talents on the building of such a devise. But, allow me to show you how it works. (A researcher brings out a dog on a leash. The dog looks rather board.) The memory erasure device does not erase all the knowledge contained in the memory lobe, but what it does is it takes the current thought of the receiving subject, in this case, the dog, and erases the thought itself and all memory relating to that thought with the combined irratence of a bright flash of light and a supersonic sound unheard by human ears. However, I'm going to ask you to where these, (he hands him a pair of dark, shaded goggles) because we accedentally erased part of one of our lab assistance's memory, so it has been proven effective against humans as well. Bring in the cat! (One of the researchers releases a cat from a kennel and the dog begins to bark at it, tugging on the leash. Derwyn pulls out a small rod from his pocket, presses the button and a bright flash of light goes off, and the dog begins yelping, then calms down. He looks at the cat curiously, sniffs it, then licks it curiously.) The dog has no recollection of a hatred towards cats. Bruce: This is great work Derwyn. All of you, really good job. This can prove affective in our animal control departments. By the way, Derwin, are you attending the annual Wayne Enterprises staff party tonight? Derwyn: Oh, yes sir. I wouldn't miss it for the world.
Wayne Manyor. There is a modern, casual party. Bruce is talking to two employees as Derwyn enters.
Bruce: Oh, hey there, Derwyn. Laura, Brom, I'd like you to meet Derwyn Dagma, our new head of Computer and Technologies Development offices. Laura: Nice to meet you. Derwyn: Charmed. Brom: So Bruce, what do you think of this whole Riddler scandal that's got the police AND Batman baffeled. Laura: You know, I hear that the Riddler isn't all that smart at all, I just hear that the one henchgirl he has comes up with all his plans and riddles FOR HIM. Derwyn: (He spits out his drink in surprise at this and wipes his chin on his sleeve.)How DARE you! The Riddler is one of Batman's cleverest and wittiest enemies since the Cluemaster! And THAT GUY was like a beached whale! The Riddler nearly figured out Batman's identity too! Closer then Joker, Penguin or Freeze ever got! (The three of them look at Derwyn like he's crazy. Derwyn quickly finishes)...But he's a psychopath nonetheless and should be locked away forever in Arkham. (They continue to look at him like he's crazy. Bruce then notices make-up on Derwyn's sleeve and notices... THE RIDDLER'S TATTOO ON THE CORNER OF DERWYN'S MOUTH!)Anyway... I'm gonna go... somewhere. (He walks away.) Bruce: Excuse me, Brom, Laura... I've got to go... somewhere... Brom: (Looks after Bruce.) Smooth.
The camera shifts back and forth between Bruce going to the Batcave and Derwyn leaving and getting into the Riddler's van. Alfred follows Bruce.
Alfred: SIR! You have a party to host up there with at least 90% of Wayne Enterprises's employees! Bruce: I think I know who the Riddler is. Alfred: Really... Bruce: remember how I said the victims' letters in their name corrospond to the date of their capture? ... Mayor Grange... Det. Ellen Yin... Joker... He's only left behind a few letters, and the rest of the letters come from the victims... he called me and Detective Yin his "double Ds," so that's two Ds. That means two letters come from each victim... D as in DETECTIVE from Batman, and A, then there's M and G from Mayor Grange... R and E in Joker, and D and N from Det. Yin... He's missing Y and W. Wayne. Put all of those letters into the computer and you get D_RWYN DAGMA. Derwin Dagma. The Head of Computers and Technology for Wayne Enterprises. (There is suddenly a crash and shouting from the party.) Alfred: Should I...? Bruce: You stay here. I'll go to him. (The usual camera shot of Batman getting suited up. Afterwards he crashes through the window.) Riddler: Ah... BATMAN. Just what I need. Where's Bruce? It's only polite to speak to the host whilst you are at his party... Batman: But not when you're crashing it. I caught onto you, Riddler and warned Wayne ahead of time. If you go back to Arkham quitely, then I won't tell everyone who you are. Riddler: Oh, but that wouldn't be fun, would it? If I were to just QUIT... see ya. (Flashbombs and smoke and the Riddler vanishes. Akward silence then...) Brom: Does this mean the party's over?
The next day at Wayne Enterprises.
Derwyn: You wanted to see me sir? Bruce: Not anymore. You're fired. Get out. Derwyn: But.. why? Bruce: Go. You've hacked Wayne Enterprises computers and you are a thief. Get out before I call the cops. Drewyn: This is... This is Gothcorp all over again... I swear, Bruce Wayne you will regret this. I will make another company millions, and you will regret this. I'll go to Nygmatech! I'll work for Nygmatech, where my work will be apreciated!!! (Storms out.) Bruce: ....Nygmatech?
Back at the Batcave... God I hate having to rewrite this...
Batman: Alfred, what do you know about Nygmatech? Alfred: Not much sir, just that they are the largest computer and software/hardware company in the country. Batman: Who owns or runs it? Alfred: I don't know his name, just that its Nygma. His last name is Nygma. Batman: I'll do a search on the name.......... Edward Nygma... Wait a second... (Batman types up EDWARD NYGMA on one side of the screen, then types DERWYN DAGMA on the other, and presses a key and the letters rearrange themselves... EDWARD NYGMA becomes DERWYN DAGMA and DERWYN DAGMA becomes EDWARD NYGMA.) Alfred: My word. What a coinsidence. They may as well have the same name. Batman: Not same name... same person... But at least we have a background on Nygma... lets see, look at this. Graduated from Oxford University, Majored in history, physics, Computers & Technology, and chemistry... (Batwave goes off, and the computer screen brings up an image of the Batsignal, and suddenly lights draw out the image of a questionmark above the Batsignal.) Alfred: Looks like someone's got a Riddle for you. Batman: Yea. And it's time to solve it.... once and for all.
Batman hops into the Batmobile and speeds off to police headquarters, but realizes the Batsignal there is turned off. Comm. Gordon points out that the signal is coming from the top of Wayne Enterprises. batman speeds off... AGAIN. He enters the office of Bruce Wayne where he finds the Riddler.
Batman: I know who you are. Riddler: Really... (Turns around in Bruce's desk chair to face Batman.) And who am I, for I am so desperate to know who I am! Batman: You're Derwyn Dagma... Riddler: NOPE! Wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong! Batman: Yes, I know. You claimed to be Derwyn Dagma when in reality you were Edward Nygma the whole time. Edward Nygma, the headchair and CEO of Nygmatech technologies. Riddler: I WAS the CEO of Nygmatech... until it went bankrupt... I was forced to sell everything to Gothcorp. Eventually I developed an alter ego and went to work for Gothcorp... but I used my great knowledge of computers and software to depict from their database information and hidden secrets. I'd sell them to other companies, who would in-turn release the product before Gothcorp ever began construction. I eventually tapped into other computers via my own and stole credit-card numbers, bank codes, learned secrets beyond imagination... including... your own secret... eh, Bruce? Batman: What?! How were you able to... how did you... Riddler: After you fired me, I tapped into your computer through the one in my old office and was about to hack into it and delete everything until... I came across your instant message to... your butler,was it? He referred to you as Master Bruce and you spoke of "preparing the batcave". Imagine how delighted I was to have stumbled upon such a secret! But don't worry, Brucey... I won't tell anyone your secret... so long as you keep mine... Batman: And if I don't reveal your secret, that will mean that you will need someone else to learn your secret, and you know that no one will be able to, therefore you'll get to blow the city to the moon anyway. Riddler: Exactly. Batman: Never. (They fight, and eventually Batman winds up crashing through the window, hanging onto the ledge.) Riddler: Now don't worry Bruce, your death will guarantee that my lips are sealed. However, even if I don't tell, there will still be... the paperboy... riding his usual route when he finds the cold, lifeless, bruised and broken body of Batman! He'll lift up the cowl (Riddler slowly moves Batman's mask upward)... to find BRUCE WAYNE IS INFACT BATMA-- huh?(Batman pulls from his belt the memory erasure device, shuts his eyes and presses the button.)No... (BRIGHT FLASH) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! (Riddler stumbles backwards, trips over the desk and gets knocked unconcious.)
The identity of the Riddler is all over the news papers and news stations the next day. Back at Arkham are two short, final scenes.
Strange: So, Mr. Nygma, are we ready to begin your therapy down the road to recovery? (Riddler grimaces in a foul, sour way.)
After the Arkham orderlies put Riddler back into his cell...
Riddler: They can't hold me here... No... They can't... I'll escape again... and wreck havoc on this city... starting with... the Batman... (Riddler starts screaming) YOU HEAR ME, BATMAN? I SWEAR IT! I WILL LEARN YOUR TRUE IDENTITY! I SWEAR TO BATMAN! YOU WILL LOSE YOUR COWL AND I SHALL KNOW YOUR TRUE NAME! I SWEAR THIS TO YOU! I SWEAR TO YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
[The End]
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Comments... feedback, please, I worked hard on this, lemme know how it was. I hoped you liked it. remember, this is written for "THe Batman". Lemme know how I did.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 9, 2006 7:51:55 GMT -5
Great especially when he spat his drink lol. Here's a hero!
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 9, 2006 17:15:22 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300] To answer your question from your PM, he put on make-up so that no one would notice his tattoo, and when he wiped his chin the make-up came off, that's when Bruce noticed it.[/glow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 9, 2006 17:28:54 GMT -5
Thanks! You know what I like your story so much I printed it and so if this post gets deleted I could still read it. Thanks for the awesome story! Here's a hero.
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 9, 2006 17:52:55 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Wow i never got a comment like that before. Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You know before I finished my RIddler story I came up with an idea for the creation of Two-Face. It will definatly have Rupurt Thorne in it, and maybe Joker... dunno. It will be written as a two-part episode, I'm calling it "Double Take". But I dunno... maybe I won't write it, who really knows. We'll see. If I do write it, it may not be for a while...[/glow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 9, 2006 18:01:53 GMT -5
ha now I'll be thinking of riddler spitting out his drink all day.... this pic I am about to show makes me think of what he might have looked like. to tell you the truth if I worked there I think I would know that he was Riddler why? Here is my reasons. long hair, his height, slightly has muscles but, slim in a way, his voice and long chin. I would have met with him somewhere and ask him a n easy riddle so he would have to give in and tell me. ;D By the way I know this story is titled riddler's revenge (based on the ride) but, here is my longer title for it 'The Remarkable Ruse of The Riddler' Great story I'd like to hear more. Bring on the stories ;D!
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 9, 2006 20:00:07 GMT -5
ha now I'll be thinking of riddler spitting out his drink all day.... this pic I am about to show makes me think of what he might have looked like. to tell you the truth if I worked there I think I would know that he was Riddler why? Here is my reasons. long hair, his height, slightly has muscles but, slim in a way, his voice and long chin. I would have met with him somewhere and ask him a n easy riddle so he would have to give in and tell me. ;D By the way I know this story is titled riddler's revenge (based on the ride) but, here is my longer title for it 'The Remarkable Ruse of The Riddler' Great story I'd like to hear more. Bring on the stories ;D! [shadow=green,left,300]Actually, I should've made this appearent, but he wears a bright red wig, and he makes his voice slightly different, like how Batman's voice and Bruce Wayne's voice are obviously the same person speaking, but one is harsher and darker while the other one is kind and pleasent... Here i'll submit a VERY ROUGH and VERY BAD sketch of what Edward Nygma/Derwyn Dagma looked like to me. I'll just draw his face.[/shadow]
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 10, 2006 16:22:36 GMT -5
UltimateRiddler that stinks that it froze but at least you had the will to try again
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 10, 2006 16:36:40 GMT -5
Thanks for the update but, I bet I still would have guessed that was Riddler . I know what your thinking how? Well, look at his chin and ask him a riddle if he answers it correctly and it is a hard riddle you probably made up then there you go it's Riddler. I know stupid but, man if he spat out his drink claiming Riddler to be cool then he must like him or be him. I will try to make my own version of Derwyn Dagma.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 11, 2006 21:10:58 GMT -5
Umm I'll try to squeeze in my stories by Sunday, got piano tomorrow and Friday I go to lots of meetings in school
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 11, 2006 21:28:11 GMT -5
Good luck with piano LaughingCats don't hit the wrong key 'Riddled' (piano falls from the ceiling lol.) I'd love to hear both of your stories at the moment I am thinking up some ideas.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 11, 2006 22:35:04 GMT -5
"RIDDLE ME THIS"
We start out with Batgirl just swinging around town on her batrope, when along comes Robin challenging her for a race. They race a little bit, and then they hear an alarm go off and go check it out. When they enter they see nothing, but they get an electric shock from behind and get knocked out. Then out from the shadows appears the Riddler who says "It's now time for the Batman to play my little game."
After losing Dick on the Batwave radar, Batman goes to check his last location he was at. He pulls up at the Gotham bank, and sees an envelope with a question mark on it. He opens it and it says: "If you want to see your partners alive and well, you'll solve my riddles or in 24 hours, they'll be in hell. Each riddle envolves a location to where they may be, here is your first riddle as you can see: If you look at the numbers on my face you won't see 13 any place." Also in the envelope was a timer for 24 hours.
Batman figures the first riddle to be a clock which must mean the Gotham Clock Tower. He goes inside and goes to find the riddle, but it's not easy. When Batman reaches the laptop where the riddle is, Riddler pops up on the screen and says "Oh, I forgot to mention, your life will also be on the line. Solve the next riddle before the 12 stroke, and you'll see what's next in line." Batman then see the bomb across the room. Batman only has 1 minute to solve the riddle. It says: "What was once red is black instead." He figures out it's a match and stops the bomb on the 10 sec mark. The only thing Batman can think of to the riddle is the fire station.
When he reaches the fire station with 15 hours left, and sees firemen laying all over the place. Firefly then appears out of nowhere, and then a hologram Riddler comes out of his hand. "The 8 of us go forth not back to protect our king from an attack. Firefly is my pawn Batman, survive him and answer the riddle, and you'll find your little friends." Firefly and Batman do battle, but Batman defeats him after he crashes into a firetruck and it falls on to him. Batman then goes to the riddle screen and it says "We're five little letters of an everyday sort, you'll find us all in a tennis court." Batman figures out that it is vowels. And think of the Gotham Grade School.
Batman then crashes through the gym window of the school and finds Riddler with Batgirl and Robin in glass cages. "Well Batman, it's no wonder you caught me in our first encounter. I knew Yinzy couldn't have been that smart." "It's over Riddler. Let them go." "Oh I can't do that just yet. Eliminating the Batman's sidekicks will make me your greatest enemy and I will have fame. So sit tight and enjoy the show."
"You may have made a fool of me on this, but I know who you are, EDWARD NIGMA!" Riddler is shocked at this and says "How- how did you, HOW?!" " You left riddles in your riddles. I just connected the numbers to the letters of the alphabet, and came up with, MR.E, which could also be E. Nigma." Riddler goes on crazy and hits Batman with his cane. Batman gets angry and hits Riddler the hardest he's ever hit anyone. In the process, he rips off his mask. Batman then sets Robin and Batgirl free. They both say Thanks.
Riddler is shown in Arkham now, with his mask off and talks to himself. "You may have figured out my identity Batman, but the Riddler will have his revenge." Then he has a maniacal laugh, and Joker then screams "Ah, shut up."
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 11, 2006 22:39:42 GMT -5
Lol good one All Star . I will hero you later once an hour passes.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 11, 2006 22:42:07 GMT -5
Thank you Riddler for getting those riddles for me for the story. What did you guys think of my story?
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