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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 1, 2006 0:36:31 GMT -5
Nice one Joe. I had wanted to a Lady Clay thing when I was thinking of movies. I just read the Poison Ivy Christmas one. I loved this one. I have found it hard to write Ivy stories, but this one was really cool. Maybe I will write an Ivy story sometime. I should finish up my story arc first. That is another two episodes I believe. Get ready for chaos.
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 1:09:28 GMT -5
oh, interesting! thanks riddler and dark knightwing. i find it hard to write ivy stories too, caus all you have to work with is... her and her plants. and thats a hard topic to work with, without being sorta repeptitive. looking forward to the next part!
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 1:44:38 GMT -5
since the last list, ending with "Legends Reborn"(With Rah's, Bane, and Talia, followed by the earthquake), i have written a few more episodes, and im just putting them in time order, for whoever to see, and for myself. here they are!
22) Ivy's Christmas- Ivy creates a monstrous christmas tree, with good intentions, but ends up trying to destroy gotham. 23) Clockwork Countdown- The Clock King appears, and battles with Joker to see who gets to kill off half of gotham, on new years eve... 24) Hot and Cold Hearts (pt 1)- Mr Freeze leaves batman to die in the crumbling Arkham, while, in the caves below, he strikes a deal with Rah's Al Ghul! 25) Hot and Cold Hearts (pt 2)- Nora becomes a cryogenic villain, and she and her husband attempt to kill the batman, deep in the caves, near the boiling lazarus pit... 26) Of Gods and Mortals- Batman gets tangled up in a story of fraud in the stock markets, and it all leads to Maxie Zeus, the insane head of the Olympus Stock Corporation. And who's assisting Zeus? Why, non other than the flaming Firefly! 27) Joker-In-The-Box (pt 1)- Giant joker-Gas releasing Jack-In-The-Boxes tear apart Arkham and the police station, but batmans not sure its joker's handiwork, and it leads back to the Ace Chemical Factory, where Joker is being held hostage... by Clayface. After a brief bout and conversation, Clayface falls into the very chemicals that created Joker, and is soon after arrested, while Joker escapes... but, unnoticed by many, a new Clayface forms from the chemicals mixed in with the mutant clay, and the female clayface escapes from the factory... 28) Clay and Tears (pt 2)- Not yet posted... you'll have to wait and see. 29) Molded and Scolded (pt 3)- Not yet posted... you'll have to wait and see. 30) Mean and Green- Not yet posted... you'll have to wait and see.
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 2:47:20 GMT -5
Clay and Tears (pt 2)
Batman returns to the batcave, following last episodes events, and is about to retire to bed, when suddenly, the batwave alerts him that a clay monster has been sighted, downtown, in the same neighbourhood that Ethan Bennet used to live in. batman rushes over, suspicous, and bursts into bennets house, and is shocked when he finds the claymonster staring at the mirror... but its not clayface. as it spots batman in the mirrow, Lady Clay turns, and inhales, blowing up a little, like a balloon, before shrinking to its normal size again, dispersing green gas from within its clay. batman coughs as he backs away, and the Lady Clay dives out the window of the bare apartment. batman watches as it slips down the sewer system, and frowns, as he drives back home. the next day, he visits clayface in jail, and tries to ask what he's up to. confused, clayface is unable to understand what bats is talking about, and soon, they both find out that this new "Lady Clay" is an offspring of Clayface, and not under his control. batmans cough continues throughout the day, and at night, he has his second run in with the joker, who's busy looting banks all over, followed closely by his latest henchwoman, Harley Quinn, who has finally escaped from Arkham to join her "puddin." there's a big fight, and joker ditches Quinn to get away, while she's forced to fend off Batman, but while they're fighting, there's a scream from in the shadows, and a huge fist, hurtles joker back out... and then Lady Clay steps out. "J-Jo-Joker... K-Kill... Jok-Joker..." are the first words mumbled from her mouth... Meanwhile, in Arkham, Clayface begins a round of shock therapy, but escapes when the electricity hits the pellet that remains within clayface from last episode, and it short-circuits the entire building, which is under-repair as it is from the Jack-In-the-box, and Clayface slithers away. Meanwhile, Harley Quinn, tackles out Lady Clay, while Batman wrestles with the Joker. Lady Clay puffs up again, and releases more of the gas from her clay and the chemicals, and Harley stumbles back, coughing. as batman punches joker, his fists become soft, and joker gives him a bop with the extend-o glove. batman begins coughing more violently, before the batmobile comes around the corner, and he takes off, leaving joker and harley to face the lady clay. in the batmobile, bats takes off his mask, and his face is crooked, with an imprint from the extend-o glove, molded to his head...
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 3:12:46 GMT -5
Molded and Scolded (pt 3)
Batman freaks out as he looks in the mirror of the batmobile, as his face begins quivering, molding itself back to its regular self, after having an imprint in it from joker's glove. he recalls the chemical vat that clayface was dropped into, and realizes that it must have somehow altered the structure of the new Lady Clay, giving her the abiility to gas anyone, morphing tem into new Clayface's as well. he rushes to the batcave, and digs up files from Arkham that would actually render a cure for Ethan, that Ethan ended up refusing after he became Clayface. Bruce tests it on himself, and hopes and preys, as he looks into a mirror. soon, he pokes his face, and is glad to see that it doesnt mold with it. he creates several more viles of it, before rushing back to the fight-scene. of course, joker, harley, and Lady Clay are all gone, but a trail of the mutant clay, leading to a construction site where the three of them are STILL fighting. batman rushes up, and shouts out, "STOP!" suprisingly, they all stop and stare at him. he turns to face Lady Clay, who growls, and lunges at him, but he successfully plants an injection of the formula into her shoulder, and she falls back, shrieking. "NO!" a fifth voice shouts out, and clayface joins the party. Lady Clay begins drooping, unable to hold her form, as holes appear left and right, as she struggles to keep herself upright. it is then that lights beam on, from behind batman, and harley speed past him in a plough vehicle, maiming the melting Lady Clay, and smashing her directly into Clayface, and the two of them begin stretching, trying to keep themselves apart, but harley dives out of the vehicle as it plummets off a cliff edge, and blowing up at the bottom, in the rocks... batman looks down, watching to see if anybody is recovered, while harley runs back to "Mr J!" Batman turns in time to prevent the two from getting away, and he notices that harley's face is drooping as well. he runs up to her, and very dramatically, and slowly, pokes her! of course, her face molds to his finger, and she shrieks, and joker flips out, pushing her away from him. batman quickly injects her with his last syringe of the cure, and she faints. joker runs, but trips, and batman cuffs him, and soon after the police and the fire trucks arrive, and put out the fire down at the rocks. batman investigates what is left of the two clay creatures, and all he finds, is a puddle of grey ooze, half-vaporized, spread across the rocks...
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Post by The Jokester on Jan 1, 2006 7:08:20 GMT -5
Joe_Destructive...forgive me for saying this, but I love you A hero a day keeps the villains away my friend ;D
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 7:19:04 GMT -5
thanks jokester! compliments are fine by me, it's the insults im weary of... although, i guess everyone needs critisism at some point... thanks again!
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Post by The Jokester on Jan 1, 2006 7:24:03 GMT -5
It's okay. I'm sure I've said this before, but you should be writing for The Batman *slaps herself* Then again, about half the fans here could write stories alone *lol*
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 1, 2006 11:00:32 GMT -5
Two good ones Joe! I don't think the first one is enough to fill up a whole episode, but that is fine. I am quite sure that a few of mine are too short. I should write my two episodes tonight. I'm looking forward to it. I would do it now, but I got to get to work in about fifteen minutes.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 1, 2006 11:24:30 GMT -5
Guys, where on page sixteen now. I deleted a bunch of my messages so that this thread could keep going. Once one gets to twenty pages, it is locked. We could start a separate page for feedback, but we could just as easily delete any unnecessary messages.
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 1, 2006 12:06:19 GMT -5
Not true Nightwing. The Wrestling thread in the Gathering section is actually on it's 22nd page.
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 1, 2006 16:29:04 GMT -5
we could just open up another section, if need be... but then this one or the second one may be considered "clutter", so they may be locked and deleted... are you sure the thread locks after the twentieth page?
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Post by All Star Batman on Jan 1, 2006 16:41:53 GMT -5
Must I repeat myself? Not true Nightwing. The Wrestling thread in the Gathering section is actually on it's 22nd page.
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Post by The Jokester on Jan 1, 2006 19:53:31 GMT -5
Well...regardless, I guess we should keep on trucking. I'm sure we'll find out if this thread gets locked or not before it gets to page 21....maybe
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 1, 2006 22:43:21 GMT -5
Hahaha Jokester that was funny! Who thinks we should make another Member's Creativity board?
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 1, 2006 23:03:47 GMT -5
Hahaha Jokester that was funny! Who thinks we should make another Member's Creativity board? If we do, we should put it in the Fan Fic gallery. We could extend and consolidate it so that any ideas for a Batman movie, a TB ep., or even a TNBA ep. would be put on this board.
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Jan 2, 2006 0:42:06 GMT -5
"The Green Team"
It starts with Gordon at his desk. He is sorting through stacks upon stacks of papers. He looks up at the window, which is ajar. G: "How long have you been standing there?" Batman comes out of the shadows: "Not as long as usual. How are you holding up?" G: "Times are hard. People are calling this place the 'cursed' department. With Ethan being turned into Clayface, Rojas transferred against his will, and Bullock blown up by Justice, I don't have enough officers. This 'Justice' character has been creating a big stirr ever since she took off half of Bullocks face. I have had five people quit within the last two weeks. I had to promote the two dirtiest cops on the force." B: "Eckhardt and Flass. I have been monitoring them for quite some time. Flass takes numerous bribes and Eckhardt is had connections to Rupert Thorne." G: "Thanks to you, he is safely behind bars. He will be in there for quite some time. Batman, how are you holding up. We had some cops arrive see you and Robin on top of the Batmobile while it was driving." B: "We were attempting to apprehend the Joker. We believe an associate of his, glued the Batmobile shut. I used the remote control device on my belt to try and apprehend him. We were unsuccessful. Commissioner, you need to start beefing up your security. Something big is about to go down." G: "What? This is an awful bad time to make this request. How do you know?" B: "Not one of the people in your police file have done anything in the past two weeks. All the common thugs and robbers are staying still. They are afraid for their lives. I scare them, but not like this. Joker, Riddler, Killer Croc, Justice, Cluemaster, and Harvey are all lose. To have not one of them stick their heads out for two weeks is just scary." G: "I suppose so. Well, I better get back to... figures." Batman is gone. It cuts to the Batcave. Batman is making adjustments on the Batbot. Robin is using a torch on the Batmobile. Batgirl: "Where did you learn how to do that?" Robin: "In the circus, there were some guys that would motorcycle inside a sphere. Whenever one of them crashed into one another, a guy named Mr. Reparo would have to fix it. I would watch him whenever he had to, until one day he taught me how to do it myself. I would have done the motorcycling, but I wasn't old enough. Hey Batman!" B: "What?" R: "Any chance I can get a motorcycle." B: "I can get you a job at Wayne Enterprises." R: "Figures." The hatch to the Batmobile pops open. R: "This doesn't earn me anything." B: "What? You think I am lame enough to carry around a Bat credit card." The scene cuts to the lair of Two Face, Riddler, and Killer Croc. KC: "Where have you been?" as Two Face walks in. TF: "I just finished with the police records. I'd had them from when I was the chief. I flipped my coin for each of the people not in line with Black Mask. The coin said that we would get two new members to our group. Joker and Poison Ivy. Riddler: "Joker? But he won't work into our plans at all." TF: "It was the coins decision. DON'T QUESTION THE COIN! I already found him and he has agreed to join. Joker pops out from behind Two Face. J: "Come on Riddler, I know that we have had our differences, but lets bury the hatchet... literally." Joker pulls out a hatchet and then pulls out a shovel. J: "HA HA HA!" The camera gives a closeup of Croc. Then the camera goes from behind Croc. On the back of Croc's ear is a transmitter. The scene cuts to Black Mask's group. BM: "So they plan on recruiting? Joker has many enemies from what intelligence Jervis gathered. What are his enemies?" MH: "Bane and Penguin. Joker stole Bane's 'buffing' device and Penguin was strung out on the rafters in the mall. Riddler would be, but it sounds as if they have settled their differences. Clayface, but he has left Gotham. He has moved to California to protect his own city." BM: "How touching. Don't expect to do something like that yourself Jervis. You're rotten to the core. No city would accept you." Justice interrupts: "So much talk and no action. When you put a gun to me, I thought you were serious." BM: "Right now, we are trying to do some recon. You would only give away our cover." J: "I might, but what about me?" Justice pulls of her costume to reveal the beautiful young woman she is. J: "Poor Amanda Butcher wouldn't get caught up in such a thing. She was always such a pretty girl. Calm, reserved, and sweet. Ha Ha Ha. I will do fine." BM: "Just don't kill anyone." Amanda Butcher (Justice) walks out. Black Mask and company listen to the speaker again. KC: "So what are we going to call ourselves?" Riddler: "We are secret. We don't need a name." Joker: "The green team!" Two Face: " WE DON'T NEED A NAME! Listen, the whole group is going to Arkham. That is where Ivy is. Lets go!" It cuts back to the Batcave. The Batwave goes off. Batman searches for what happened. B: "Oh no!" R: "What happened?" B: "There is two break outs. One is at Arkham Asylum and the other is at Blackgate Prison. Arkham was busted into by Joker, Two Face, and Killer Croc. Blackgate is being busted into by some girl." R: "I hate to sound like a chicken, but can I take Blackgate." Batgirl: "You just want to meet this girl." Batman interrupts before Robin can answer: "Fine, Robin you can take the Batcycle. Batgirl, I'm going to need your help." It cuts to Arkham where the gate is bent all to pieces. Outside of it is a bus. Inside is Riddler and his followers. The followers are all working tirelessly at the information in the computers. It cuts to inside Arkham where the green team is inside, just outside Ivy's cell. Joker uses his acid to out the bars. Ivy sits, bewildered when they bust in. I: "What is going on?" TF: "No time to explain. You are joining us." I: "Who are you?" TF: "We..." J: "Where the Green Team. I hope you don't mind boss, but I thought off a few new recruits." Joker is joined by Punch and Judy. TF: "I'll flip for them. It lands scratched. "Evil wins. Lets go!" It cuts to Robin on the Batcycle arriving at Blackgate. He enters and notices all the guards are knocked out and bruised. He starts running through. He finds Amanda at Penguin's cell. R: "Stop! Don't..." He is taken aback at how beautiful she is. He quickly recovers: "What do you think you are doing?" A: "He can help me. You must be that one that follows Batman." R: "I have a name." A: "Yeah, well take this!" She lets Penguin loose. P: "I don't care if you saved my life. You sure did play with my life." Penguin and Robin start fighting. It cuts back to Batman and Batgirl arriving at Arkham. All of the Green Team are getting onto Riddler's bus. Punch and Judy squeeze into the back. A big car chase goes on. Eventually, the bus emits a flash grenade. When the light clears, the bus is gone. Batgirl, well I guess I wasn't that much of a help after all. I wonder how Robin is doing." Batman: "I'll radio him... no response." It cuts back to the bus. Inside, they are talking. Then Two Face says: "We know that you are listening to this Black Mask. Riddler set this up as a two way radio. Amanda Butcher is the cop killer Justice. Well, this girl is second on my list. She is Two Face's enemy. You are Harvey Bullock's nemesis. We tracked the signal back to your hideout. You won't be around by the time that she gets back with Bane and Penguin. It looks like we have arrived at Gothcorp. Box Factory. That is your hideout is it not. The camera goes to behind the bus. Then zooms in on a tiny Bat tracer. It then cuts to Batman and Batgirl in the Batmobile, listening in. It concludes on Robin finishing of the Penguin. R: "Impressed? Maybe you could stop letting crazy people out of jail and come see a movie with me?" A: "You didn't think that I knocked out all those guards by myself did you?" Robin turns around to Bane. Bane gives a knock out pound. The screen goes black.
To Be Continued...
P.S. This is a special hour long episode. It is still one ep., but twice as long.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 2, 2006 0:50:55 GMT -5
Good story here is a hero
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 2, 2006 10:46:08 GMT -5
Wow I sure missed a lot
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 2, 2006 16:33:32 GMT -5
nice one, indeed dark knightwing! howsabout this one? Mean and Green-
The episode begins with the camera being in someone's vision, and they are trapped in a small cramped red chamber. they reach to push a wall, and it easily collapses, and folds delicately, as they step out, and turn to face the chamber, which turns out to be a giant red flower. the person turns back around, looking forward, to see a giant garden lab. they run to a desk, and scramble through all the papers, and grab a mirror from underneath. as they look in it, the camera (still in the eyes of the mystery guest) catches glimpse of her. it is poison ivy who looks back from the mirror, and her eyes widen as her voice echoes out. "I... I'm Poison... Ivy. Wh-Why was I... in that flower? Why can't I... I can't remember! What happened!?... BATMAN! He must have a role in this! I was... trapped! in my own flower! Why can't I... remember? the camera goes down with her as her eyes scan the papers on the desk, and she picks up one sheet, and analyzes it, the camera still viewing from her eyes. the scene finally changes, to batman busting up another heist by some perps, and tying them up together, upside down, for the police to find. the batwave begins beeping, and batman rushes to the Gotham Theatre Museum, which, as he discovers, has been half eaten by thorny vines, and monstrous looking plants. he walks in, and in the main hall, he finds ivy, sitting on top of a huge bloomed flower that has tilted to make a seat. "Ivy? I thought you died!" Batman shouts out, as Ivy looks up. "Died? Is that what you did? KILLED ME? I can't even remember what happened recently! All i remember was... the asylum, it... collapsed, and then its all a blur! I woke up, stuffed up in some flower pod cell! I barely remembered who i was! not until i saw myself, did i remember anything." she spits at him. "You... you fell into the Lazarus cracks, and... you couldn't have survived!" at this point, ivy stands up, and pulls out a crossbow gun from the flower, and begins firing at batman. batman dodges the arrows, as ivy screams, yelling at him for always muddling her plans up. soon enough, she runs out of arrows, and the plants continue trying to get a hold of him, but he escapes by dosing them with drops of acid. "Ivy, this has to stop. You need to return to Arkham. They can help you there!" "Can they? Look at me! I can't even remember what happened after that crummy hell-hole collapsed!" batman backs up into a wall, just as dozens of vines break through, and entangle him, snagging the acid away from him, and shattering it on the floor. the vines begin pulling him back into their source, deep in the next room over, where a thorny flower lays, with the vines coming from within it's petals. he struggles to escape, when suddenly, a batarang appears from no where, flying through the vines, slicing them in half. batgirl jumps down, and pulls batman to his feet. "What are you doing here? Your dad ordered you to quit." Batman scolds her. "Well, it's not easy going cold turkey, ya know?" she argues. "Well lookey who it is. My old... nemesis. Come to try to foil my plans again? You see, i wasnt out for plants tonight, or even money. i was out to get rid batman, and if i could, his baby brat sister. and you wondered right into the trap. MY trap." poison ivy boasts. As she runs over, she leaps up, flips in mid air, and lands standing on top of one of her many giant flowers… “Kill them!” she shouts, as the vines begin bursting through the wall, smashing the museums structure, while the flower simply moves out of the way of the falling debris… batgirl lunges, and catches hold of one of the petals, dragging the flower down, and causing ivy to fall off. They both land, and begin battling, punching and kicking at each other, until batgirl ducks as ivy at her, and batgirl tackles her out, smashing her into a wall, which is unsteady as it is, and begins collapsing on them. batgirl manages to escape in time, but ivy is half-buried by falling bricks. “Help me!” She shouts, but as batgirl pulls her out, ivy begins darkening, her hair falling out in PETALS, and soon, in a matter of seconds, she is a giant dead flower, laying in a heap. Batgirl screams, and backs away, and all of the vines cease to move, and batman squirms his way out. “What happened? She died!” Batgirl shouts. “I don’t think that *she* was ivy… I think she was a clone. I saw ivy die, on Christmas. She fell into the Lazarus cracks. The steam probably alone was enough to burn her to death…” batman concludes. But as he says that, the camera rises to the rooftop, where a slightly mutated ivy stands, greener than usual, with thorns sticking from her skin. She cries one tear, and says, “Oh, batman. I’m far from dead. But tonight’s not the night for me to get my revenge… but it WILL come…” before she leaps off the toppling museum, into one of the cracks of the earthquake…
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 2, 2006 16:39:02 GMT -5
as someone said before, im sure its not long enough to be an EPISODE... but yeah... its a story at least.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 3, 2006 0:32:07 GMT -5
These stories and their diaolgues dont sound like The Batman at all to me. It sounds a lot like the way writers wrote episodes in B:TAS I wouldn't expect Batman say "Ivy? I thought you died! " Batman doesnt interact with the villains the way he does in BTAS The stories are awesome but are leaning to a different series PS: Its just IMO
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Post by joe_destructive on Jan 4, 2006 2:37:56 GMT -5
i see your point there lauhing cats... o well, these wont actually ever be... real episodes... but still, i see your point on that matter...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 4, 2006 7:47:42 GMT -5
I'll read yours later Joe I have to go to evil school.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 4, 2006 23:52:49 GMT -5
Batman or 'Chris' is looking for scripts and plots for his own Batman series, so you can pm him your ideas
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Post by The Dark Knight on Jan 4, 2006 23:54:48 GMT -5
I'd like to see your Misty Ree story soon The Dark Nightwing Im going to try to make more stories up like you guys do, and my main target at the moment is: TwoFace and Clayface, bot have face in their name and were misfigured by Joker (in my stories) so I'd like to create something cool out of it that I hope will spark new stories in my mind
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 6, 2006 22:39:58 GMT -5
I'd like to post a story I've been working on, and I think this is the best so far. It is a... Riddler story, but I've made it as being a movie from "The Batman" cartoon, which explores the Riddler's true identity. Before I get started, I want to again thank Dark Nightwing for writing the Misty Ree story. I'm glad you liked my idea. [shadow=green,pre,300]It starts out with the Riddler in Arkham Asylum, in a straightjack, talking to Professor Strange. Strange: Now now, Mr. Riddler, if you hope to be released from here as a free man instead of having to escape every time, you must tell me your name. I do not perfer to address my patients by the name they are known as as criminals. Riddler: Ah, but, Professor, that is all part of the game. And if you can beat me at my own game, I'll solve your riddle. Bruce Wayne is at his office desk, when his secretary comes in. Secretary: Mr. Wayne, Derwin Dagma is here to see you. Bruce: Show him in. Derwin: (enters) Mr. Wayne, I am so happy you agreed to hire me. Bruce: Well, we need a computer technitician like you on our staff. I understand from your profile you used to work for Gothcorp? Derwin: Yes, until the Firefly scandal. Because he was robbing other companies of their computer-based memories and data, the judged forced the CEOs of Gothcorp to fire their employees. They believed Firefly had inside help. Bruce: Well let me show you around the office. Bruce gives Derwin the tour, yadayada. On with the mystery. Batman is at his computer, checking out Derwin. Batman: Something about him just doesn't add up. He doesn't have any pre-existing history prior to working for Gothcorp... (Batwave goes off) Wait a second, Joker is holding up a... a dog show? Alfred: Should I call Bathound, sir? Batman: ...Yea. Tell him to stay. batman races into town, where he finds Joker and his hyenas holding up a dog show. Joker: I can't believe you didn't invite MEE! Even though it is obvious that my pooches would've won anyway. (Batman comes in) Batman: Sorry Joker, you aren't top dog today. : No, but I am. (In comes.... THE RIDDLER) Joker: The Riddler? What are you doing here? Riddler: I've come to launch my newest game for Gotham City. I've decided to share my identity with all of Gotham. However, you must figure it out for yourselves. Here's your first clue: The man who killed 1/4 of the human population. Now, if no one in Gotham can guess who I am by the stroke of midnight on August 4th, I will destroy Gotham. That is four months from today. By then you should have all the clues figured out to my enigma. Good luck. Riddler and henchmen (and henchwoman) drop smoke bombs everywhere, and when it clears out, the Riddler and Joker are *Gasp* gone.[/shadow] Okay everyone that is the first chapter to my story. Comments please. I wouldn't want to continue a story that no one has interest in.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 6, 2006 22:50:01 GMT -5
This is the best Riddler story I have read!!!!!! I will hero you tommorow for this exellent story partner . You are a genius along with all the rest of the gang. Bring on Part 2
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Post by Hush Riddler on Jan 6, 2006 22:55:42 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300]Okay partner. I'll bring on part two tomorrow... I have the whole story down, but... I'm still figuring out a way in which all of his clues can lead to his identity. I have the idea, now I just need to write out the Riddles and make them all fit. Will post tomorrow.[/shadow]
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Jan 6, 2006 23:02:00 GMT -5
That's what I thought as well how would they fit... but, I am sure you'll figure something out . If you need a hint of help you know where I am .
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