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Post by jasontodd2 on Dec 15, 2005 0:13:30 GMT -5
I would love to see and episode with Killer Croc & Man Bat as the main villians, and The Batman tracks them down to a swampy area in the middle of Louisianna (spelling) or where ever there are great swamp lands, and have a special appearence from The Swamp Thing
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 15, 2005 2:11:10 GMT -5
Riddled with Bullets- (this is just a full version of one of my past stories)
The episode starts with a cry for help, echoing down the halls of Arkham. one of thre guards come running, to find Cluemaster, in his cell, with a string atached to a helmet, which is on his head, if he moves anymore, the string will snap, and will pull a trigger aiming at him. in the chamber, the riddlers voice echoes through, repeating the same riddle over and over again... cluemaster, tries to calm down, and begins answering the riddle. at hearing the answer, the tape stops, and the wire snaps, but the gun doesnt go off, cluemaster stands out of bed, and runs to the door, but two clamps catch his feet, and a large screen lowers from the far wall, and a video recording shows riddler's face, demonstrating what this foot trap will do, as two more clamps appear from the ceiling, and latch onto his hands, and pulling upwards, tearing the test dummy into two. following that, another riddle rings through the chamber, repeating itself, until Cluemaster solves it, at which time the clamps release him, and he runs for the door, which is charged with an electric barrier, which triggers an energy field to lower tightly around him from the ceiling, trapping him. as he tries to move, he is jolted again, and a third riddle once again chimes through his cell. within this period of time, batman arrives, at gordon's orders, and leaves, on a hunt for riddler at his last known adress. there, he finds a riddle for him: "Deep within the halls i lay. On a dark, and cheerless day. Gone my freedom, here to stay. Stuck in here, to wait for day...
Vacant lot, empty no more, Agonized by grey and bore. Nothing but bars, and punishing chore, Escaping, without a door..."
He runs to the Blackgate Prison, and discovers another riddle, pinned to a dummy "escaped inmate", stuck on the barbed fence: "A PENNY for the ROYALS"
Batman begins calculating, and figures out that it must be the Copper Crown, on display at the Gotham Museum. as he speed there in his batmobile, he happens to place his change of clothes over top part of the first riddle, leaving only the first letter of each line visible, spelling "Dog's Vane", a type of flower, and on thinking of flowers, realizes that the second clue was also a flower, the Pennyroyal. he also figures out that both clues contained more clues, and he searches for the Victorian Language of Flowers, and finds out that the flowers symbolize Deceipt, and Flee Away! without even entering the museum, he speeds of to Arkham, and discovers Riddler and Cluemaster, as accomplices, not enemies, holding the guards up as they slowly back away. Riddler compliments Bats on his detective skills, and Cluemaster gives a chuckle, as he explains how the traps were a ruse, and how the museum was going to be a trap for batman, as it would go into complete lockdown, before blowing up, if the alarm was in anyway triggered. Batman swings out one of his little grappling hook gun, but flicks a switch, and launches out two tazer wires instead. they hit Cluemaster, who flinches, before crumbling tot he ground, and then Bats grabs a batarang, and throws it at Riddler, who throws his own "riddlerang", which is the same thing in the shape of a question mark. the exploding batarang hits the electric "riddlerang", and the two are launched backwards from the blast. the blast sends Riddler into Cluemaster's cell, and sets off another trap, which electrocutes him before he can answer his own riddle, and also slumps into unconciousness... Eventually, all the traps are defused, and Riddler is sent to his own cell, and Cluemaster is also locked away. Batman warns the museum of their own trap, and they defuse it, and Gordon has another chat with Batman on the police roof, about how since Batgirl arrived, criminals have also been doubling up. Batman tries to explain that this isnt because of Batgirls arrival, but begins doubting his own theory, but is interuppted by Goordon who announces that another vigilante has hit the streets, dubbed by the media as "The Boy Wonder..."
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 15, 2005 7:25:43 GMT -5
A hero for you Joe Destuctive I love your stories!!!! How did you come up with Riddler-rang? That would be an awesome weapon for him.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 15, 2005 16:25:24 GMT -5
Very nice Joe_destructive! Although Im havign a bit of trouble viewing Riddler as being more violent than cunning. But awesome plot and ending
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 15, 2005 21:01:16 GMT -5
aw thanks guys! thanks! i like the riddlerang too! hahaha!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 15, 2005 21:40:30 GMT -5
I wish I could come up with awesome stories my Ivy and Riddler one was pretty bad. *cry* I hope Riddler uses the RiddlerRang!(sounds like something Scooby Doo would say.) BTW laughingcatsxp do you know what happened to ragwurm on the WB boards I miss her. I hope nothing happened, ha RiddlerRang does sound like something Scooby Doo would say.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 15, 2005 22:30:45 GMT -5
What moves like lightning But creates a loud bang? None other than my Riddlerrang XP
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 15, 2005 22:31:29 GMT -5
Ragwurm? Im not sure, perhaps she felt lonely and left? I honestly don't have the slightest clue :/
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 15, 2005 23:25:40 GMT -5
"Out Break" Part Three
It starts with an overview of everyone that is under the mind control. Then goes to Rojas saying, "All right, with the commissioner out of the picture, I'm in charge. Shoot to kill." Robin interrupts, "NO!! You can't just kill all of them. Some of them are hopeless, but some could be rehabilitated. They aren't themselves." Rojas: "No, they aren't themselves. If they were, we would be dead. Look over there. Theives, criminals, and vigilantes are better off dead. The commissioner has let the people down by accepting that vigilante as a crime fighting tool." Riddler interjects: "I would seem that the authorities are now much like the omelet. Will Humpdy Dumpdy fall of the wall, or will it be Robin who breaks its own eggs?" Clayface answers, "Robin is in charge. Unless if Rojas would like to know what it feels like to be upside down, 70 feet in the air." Rojas backs down, while Robin steps up "None of them are using firearms. Use your night sticks to battle them. All of the mind slaves attack the police officer's. Yin does battle with Catwoman. Rojas takes on the Ventriloquest. Robin finishes off Gearhead using a tazer. Clayface attacks Batman. Through this battle, they get separated from the rest of the fights. Eventually, Clayface accidentally unmasks Batman. Clayface, while completely shocked by what he just saw, hears the Riddler coming closer, so he quickly puts his mask back on him. Riddler: "What can you control completely?" C: "A puppet." R: "Well, I guess you aren't all brawn and no brain. As you can see, I have complete control of Batman. The others are just on an auto pilot say to 'attack the police'. Now I can attack anyone I want. Why don't you join me?" C: "Because I believe in a greater good." R: "Really, I can take over this entire country with these slaves and your cooperation." C: "Slaves. Your SLAVES. I'm BLACK!! My ancestors were slaves. No, there is no way that I am going to join you." R: "Have it you way". Batman uses remote control of the batmobile and has it run over Clayface. It cuts back to Robin leading the police force. Catwoman, Maxie Zeus, and the Ventriloquest are all handcuffed. Ragdoll had been handcuffed several times, but had so far been unable to be constrained. Robin says to Yin, "Riddler and Batman are gone, I'm going to find them." Yin nods and starts fighting Killer Croc. Rojas and many other cops are trying to get Manbat to quit flying. Croc attacks Yin many times, but she evades the attacks. After one of these attacks, Yin uses her night stick and smashes Croc in the back of the neck. Upon doing that, Croc wakes up from the mind control. He looks around at all the handcuffed villains and makes a run for it and escapes. It cuts back to Robin where he is approaching Riddler's back, undetected. Clayface is being run over and burned from the jets in an attempt to "get the clay to stay solid". Robin uses a grapple to grab Riddler's cane. Once Robin has the cane, he snaps it on his knee, ending the mind control. All of the mind controlled people are set free. Batman stops the batmobile, Batgirl stops attacking Rojas, and the Gordon quits attacking Yin. Robin says to Riddler, "No omelet. Hard boiled." Riddler: "This has been fun cooking with you, but know it is time for the main dish. Sliced robin!!! He throws a Riddler-rang (I liked that Joe) and throws it at Robin. Robin get out his fighting sticks and deflects it, but upon impact, it becomes a cloud of thick smoke. Once it clears, Riddler is gone. Clayface gets up and says thanks to Robin. Then talks to Batman about him being Bruce. Then they rejoin the cops. Clayface says to the whole group, "Thank you everyone. You taught me why I started fighting crime in the first place, to make a difference. I am going to find a city of my own to start protecting. Good Bye! Thank you Yin and Robin!" It cuts to Croc running away. Riddler walks out in front of him. Riddler starts manipulating Croc against his true enemy, Mad Hatter. Then Croc smells Hatter nearby. He had been spying on those two's agreement. Then Hatter gets into a limo that stopped to let him in. It cuts back to Gordon, where he starts talking with Batman. G: "All the villains that escaped have been apprehended. The only one lose is Killer Croc." B: "Riddler is, and this new guy that seems to be The Mad Hatter is on the lose too. Did you hear about what Rojas had ordered?" G: "I did. Rojas is going to be transferring to Metropolis. His replacement is coming from Bludhaven." B: "Who is it?" G: "Harvey Bullock. He is a detective that was working on apprehending the notorious Black Mask. He needed it as a favor, and since we need him anyway, it worked out." Batman is gone (I used to love these moments in B:TAS). It cuts to inside the limo. Hatter is panting. In the driver's seat is Clumaster. Hatter starts talking, "The whole thing was fouled up by Riddler. He just got Killer Croc on his side now too." Looking at Hatter from the opposite chair is Black Mask. BM: "We have been watching it all over the news. This Riddler fellow will have to be taken care of before we can hope to take out the cops. We'll wait for him to show up again, then crush him when he does. Until then, I think we should start establishing something organized in Gotham."
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 16, 2005 0:12:29 GMT -5
o! awesome as possum can be! the riddlerang lives! hahaha... the name says it all...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 16, 2005 0:17:41 GMT -5
o! and great way to indtroduce Bullcok, and get rid of Rojas!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 16, 2005 7:37:33 GMT -5
I wonder if they will use the RiddlerRang in the Batman Strikes he is in? I hope they give him that weapon but, the cane is always the best. ;D Good story Dark Nightwing and laughingcatsxp nice rhyme, I miss Ragwurm she probably is on vacation, today is my last day of school till January 3. I now get to chat with you all more often. Yipppee
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 16, 2005 7:39:35 GMT -5
I am going to try to make a story and and if it is good I will hopefully get more Karma. But, might take me a while to think about.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 16, 2005 17:16:31 GMT -5
oh lucky Riddler! I have to take exams before my break
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 16, 2005 17:36:49 GMT -5
I am sorry Laughingcatsxp Good luck but, till then I hope you you get to enjoy LoG during the holidays.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 16, 2005 23:04:22 GMT -5
Bah humbug! J/K thanks Riddler, I better start studying
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 16, 2005 23:10:10 GMT -5
I'm sorry Laughingcats my school is crazy they gave me me homework on vacation? I wish people would stop calling me names, it's really getting annoying everyone there hates me but, for now I'll ignore them. Plus, I don't need to listen to them calling me weird for liking Batman they are Crazy! It is good to know I have tons of friends on LoG thanks Laughingcatsxp
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 17, 2005 17:32:20 GMT -5
THat's sad Riddler, everyone should be able to like what they want to like without having to be made fun of! It's just wrong! I'd like to see them get eat up by Poison Ivy's n00b eating plants!
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 17, 2005 23:35:00 GMT -5
Temblor threatens the city, in his attempt at revenge, by warning everyone in Gotham that he's about to unleash the Quake Manipulator, which would devestate the entire city if triggered. Batman confronts him, and has another fight with him, but temblor gets away, after he shatters the columns supporting a roof, which caves in on batman. Temblor is then confronted by Bane, who does not wish to have Gotham destroyed while he's in it, and if anything, he wants to be the one to demolish it. the two of them get in a fight,and by the end, have made partners in each other. Temblor runs to the hidden bomb, which is directly below Arkham, and sets it to blow. As he does, Batman confronts him, and defuses the bomb, and Bane leaps out, and beats Batman down. as bane turns back around to face temblor, he is blown back as temblor unleashes a small quake with his gloves. bane is angered, and thrashes Temblor into the bomb, which sets it off again, with only a few seconds left until it is set to shatter the grounds of gotham. it begins, and cracks the ground around it, sending bane, temblor, batman, and the bomb into a large crevice. batman's cape catches, and he watches as the two villains and the bomb plummet out of site. as he crawls up, he realizes that the bomb was no threat at all, except for the fact that as he sits there, arkham asylum is sinking deep into the caves below it, quickly, and he rushes out of there, he watches it happen as he expected. commisionar gordon arrives with a fleet of squad cars behind him, as hundreds of patients break through the cracks, and rage their way out of the area, plunging gotham into their grips of deranged fists... to make matters worse, the last patient to leave is caught momentarily by the cops, only to gas them, and leave them absolutely TERRIFIED...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 17, 2005 23:37:31 GMT -5
now, fellow batfans, what would be a good title for this little story?
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 17, 2005 23:39:58 GMT -5
Thanks you guys and Poison Ivy's plants wouldn't eat them they never take showers and smell horrible! They would die the only villain who can beat them is Bane, I don't think he has a nose, I mean he does but, well you know what I mean. They make fun of me because I like Batman and I'm a fan of a person who really having a hard time right now I am not saying any names though. They also make fun of me because that is their hobby, shoot they even make spit wads in class I wish that they would just all disaspear. BTW way nice story Joe!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 17, 2005 23:42:44 GMT -5
I haven't had any titles for my stories, but I would go with "Loco Motion" for your new one. By the way, great Scarecrow introduction. I hope that the caves that Temblor and Bane go through lead to the batcave. If I just gave away a future episode, sorry.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 17, 2005 23:46:40 GMT -5
How about "Deadly Mercenary's" Temblor and Bane did both work for someone why not? Just my thought.
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 17, 2005 23:48:31 GMT -5
loco motive? nice! no, you didnt give away a future story, but as u said that, im thinking of something... nice title Dark Nightwing
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 18, 2005 0:09:19 GMT -5
(part two of above story)
As batman returns to his home, alfred runs up, asking how he is, if he's alright etc. batman keeps walking by, moodily, and alfred looks confused. bats opens up a chart on the batcomputer, scanning the caves where Arkham collapsed inwards, and realizes that they trace back to the batcave, in a complicated, but threatening route. "Oh no..." the scene cuts to the villain in the shadows, who was at the end of the last episode, crawling around in the shadows, giggling, and speaking in a muttering words, "let the fear run like crazy!, haha...", as police search the premises for the doctors, the skinny villain takes over one of their squad cars, and grabs a small aerosal can like object from his pocket, and takes the lid of the flashing lights, replacing the rotating light with the can, which rotates in it's place, letting a red gas spray in circles, as he rams the car through the walls of Arkham, breaking into the lower, now underground parts, and realizes he's taking a wrong turn, he tries to retrace his steps, in the car, and begins bombing through the caves, and soon enough, he comes to a wall, which he tries to brake at, but instead keeps hurling through. the car falls into air, and he jumps out, catching himself on a ledge, as the car explodes, catching the flammable gas. the explosion shakes the cave, and batman rushes over, only to be gassed as well. alfred hits the mystery villain(u know who) on the head with his fist, but the person turns, into the light, revealing a mask resembling a rotting corpse. the mask itself terrifes alfred, who falls, off the ledge, and into a large lake of water, near where the car landed. in a frenzy, batman attacks scarecrow, who reaches for a bomb, loaded with his specialty gas. as he throws it, batman tackles him out, into the computer screen, where he is shocked, and as sparks fly, the gas is lit, and the bomb explodes, slowly collapsing the cave. alfred awakens, and looks up, and finds batman, impaled by one of the stalacites. he freaks out, as scarecrow reaches for him, and slowly chokes him, brreaking him through the cave walls, and altogether thrashing him, before alfred wakes up, and realizes that he's in bed, his arm in a cast, as bruce just enters the room, bandaged up. "o good, ur awake" "Wat on earth HAPPENED?" bruce smiles an evil smile, and suddenly rips his own face off, like a mask, with the corpse-looking face of scarecrow underneathe. Alfred wakes up AGAIN, and finds himself, in a hospital, with bruce and some doctors surrounding him. "He's alive! Keep his stats up!" the episode wends with alfred learning (with a flashback for the audience, as bruce retells wat really happened) that scarecrow knocked alfred over the cliff, intot he water, only to be thrown into the computer, electrocuting him, and lighting himself on fire from his extra bombs, before being thrwon into the water himself. batman grabs alfred and scarecrow, both unconcious, and takes them to the hospital. scarecrow is then sent to a makeshift jail-cell at Blackgate, until Arkham can be rebuilt...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 18, 2005 0:10:22 GMT -5
deadly mercenaries? that might work too! great ideas so far! thanks for the caves idea also!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 18, 2005 0:29:29 GMT -5
This episode involves the first homemade character for Batman that I have done(I have created my own villains that would go in against my comicbook hero). In this episode, Robin and Batgirl are not present.
"Poetic Justice" It starts with Bruce Wayne attending a Wayne Foundation foster home. He is being led through by Lucius Fox. Upon meeting countless teenagers that live in the home, he meets one girl that just fascinates him. Her name is Amanda Butcher. Bruce asks to come visit his mansion. She talks about how her family had been killed in a car accident. She has a very, very dark and mysterious glow to her. Bruce mentions fighting to help the people of Gotham from the villains of the city. It goes into a flashback, where she was in the car with her parents. A police vehicle comes around a turn far too quickly. The police car is swerving all over the road. The Butcher family is smashed head on by the GCPD car. It cuts back to Amanda. She is now sweating and looks horrified. Bruce sees this and offers to go get Alfred to get some water. Once Bruce turns around, Amanda grabs long pole lamp and hits him over the head with it. Alfred hears the noise, but watches her pass out the door (he was afraid of what would happen if she turned against him. Alfred revives Bruce and Batman tries to track him down. Meanwhile, Amanda is now in Gotham Library, where she is on a computer. It cuts the computer screen where she is looking up the exact details of her parents death. Apparantly, Gotham City police chief O'Hara was driving around under the influence of alcohol. Amanda goes to a fabric store and creates a costume for her new quest in life, take out the police. She calls herself "Justice". Meanwhile Bruce has been bandaged up and is now on the pursuit of Justice. This one goes ends with Batman in the Batmobile, contemplating about the monster that he may have just unleashed on Gotham City's finest.
Stay tuned for the next episode. I guess that I am going to try to make a full season of 13 episodes. I will have to backtrack in order to do a Robin origin story though. Oh, by the way Chief O'Hara is not to offend the Irish. I put him as the culprit because he was the police chief of Gotham long ago, in Adam West's Batman.
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 18, 2005 1:57:33 GMT -5
nice! its nice to see someone else makes their own villains and super-hero's! iv gotten so far as to make my own comics, about eight of them... nice story!
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 18, 2005 9:03:29 GMT -5
Nicwe story Dark Nightwing and Joe-Destructive!
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 18, 2005 9:46:18 GMT -5
Gosh these stories are amazing! I wonder how you guys think up so many cool plots!
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