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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 18, 2005 14:30:17 GMT -5
As far as continuity, this episode is before my three parter and my origin story for Robin (hasn't been written yet). And rather than make this a two part episode like I had intended, I think it would be better to just add a conclusion to it and make it just one episode. Here is the conclusion to the above story.
"Poetic Justice" continued..
Batman drives to Gotham police station. He warns Chief Rojas (mind you this is before he was transferred) that there is a girl who is quite dangerous. Once he describes her to him, Rojas just laughs and says that he doesn't need protection from sixteen year old girls. Suddenly, Justice makes her debut by attacking Rojas. Batman fends her away. She attacks with such strength and rage. Batman sees this as a motivational equal. Then she speaks, "Let me kill the police chief." B: "You aren't well. You need to talk to someone." J: "You... you are just as bad as the cops. I read about you. You cause more harm than good." B: "That may be, but I try to redeem my mistakes. Not bottle them up until they explode." Justice stops fighting and just stands their. Then she walks out onto the train tracks. Batman repeatedly tries to get her away as an oncoming train is approaching. He jumps to try to save her, but she rolls him over her shoulder. The train comes and runs her over. The episode ends with Bruce Wayne attending a funeral for Amanda Butcher. The last scene is Amanda inside a compartment of the train. In a bag beside her is a heavily ripped up Justice outfit. She says, "Wait till the police see how powerful a ghost can be."
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 19, 2005 0:08:27 GMT -5
oooh, thats creepy The Dark Nightwing... i like it! what does Justice's costume look like? u know wat villain i really liked from the old batman cartoon? THE JUDGE! i mean, it turned out to be two-face, but still, i liked the judge... i just thot of that when i heard that name "Justice"...
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 19, 2005 15:07:10 GMT -5
oooh, thats creepy The Dark Nightwing... i like it! what does Justice's costume look like? u know wat villain i really liked from the old batman cartoon? THE JUDGE! i mean, it turned out to be two-face, but still, i liked the judge... i just thot of that when i heard that name "Justice"... You know, I had thought a little about the Judge when I came up with the name of her. As far as costume goes, I really want the costume to show how she feels on the inside. The color of her costume would be red, blue, and black. Red symbolizes her anger, blue symbolizes her depression, and black symbolizes death. If any artists would like to draw some pictures of Amanda Butcher or Justice, that would be really cool and I would reward you with some hero's.
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 19, 2005 17:14:12 GMT -5
Did you have any drawing with the color in it?
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Post by Chris on Dec 19, 2005 17:19:58 GMT -5
everybody is socreative here
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 20, 2005 18:58:26 GMT -5
I can't come up with any so far but, when I do I'll tell you.
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 20, 2005 20:24:33 GMT -5
"Corrupt Justice" "Poetic Justice" "Unjustified" those r some i thot of for the above one...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 20, 2005 20:25:39 GMT -5
hey, i find that if someone mentions an idea, that i can get an easier idea of a story to write... anyone wanna tell me some? i love thinking of plots!
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Post by Dark Nightwing on Dec 20, 2005 20:28:21 GMT -5
"Corrupt Justice" "Poetic Justice" "Unjustified" those r some i thot of for the above one... "Poetic Justice", I like it. I think that his shall be the name for this story. Any ideas on titles for my three part episode?
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Post by All Star Batman on Dec 20, 2005 20:50:53 GMT -5
Ok, I got a few ideas for S4: The inititals mean who appears in the episode in costume.
FLYING AND FALLING(BM, BG) A night at the circus for Bruce and Vicky turns into a tragedy for young Dick Grayson as his parents fall to their deaths in a acrobat accident. But Batman has found this is no accident.
THE BOY WONDER(BM,BG,RB) Batman and Batgirl track down the person responsible for the Grayson parents demise, but he's well protected by one of Batman's most deadliest enemies: BANE! The Batdou are going to need some help from a new partner. Prepare yourself for Robin, The Boy Wonder!
THE DEMON'S HEAD(BM, RB) Ra's Al Ghul and his daughter Talia have arrived in Gotham, but this isn't the first time the Dark Knight has met them.
ORIGINS(BM) After asking him about his connection to Ra's Al Ghul, Bruce tells Dick his story of why he became the Batman and how he knows Ra's Al Ghul.
MASTER VS. STUDENT(BM) Batman meets Ra's Al Ghul in one last showdown, where only one will walk away.
FEAR ITSELF(BM,RB,BG) The Scarecrow has arrived in Gotham. Batman tries to stop him, but becomes infected with the fear toxin himself. Now if they could only get along, it's up to Robin and Batgirl to stop Scarecrow and create an antidote in time to save Gotham and their mentor.
KILLER'S BANE(BM,RB) Killer Croc returns to settle his score with Batman, but Bane want's to finish his with the Dark Knight and also take down the Boy Wonder.
TWO SIDES TO EVERY COIN(BM) The mobsters are back in Gotham, but Batman manages to bring one in, calling himself Black Mask. And Bruce's friend, prosecuter Harvey Dent is about to have his life changed forever.
WAR GAMES(BM,BG,RB) Gotham is in a crisis as Rupert Thorne, Carmine Falcone, Black Mask, Two-Face, and the Ventriloquist all battle over control of Gotham. Now as the city's last hope, it's up to Batman, Robin, and Batgirl to bring justice back to Gotham at any means necesary.
CLAYFACE'S LAST STAND(BM) After a deadly injection by Professor Strange, Clayface begins to fall apart. And the only way for him to get the antidote, he must bring the Batman to Strange.
ICE BRIDE(RB, BG) Maxie Zeus is looking for a bride to rule his empire with him, and kidnaps Nora Fries. But her exhusband, Mr. Freeze has something to say about that.
RIDDLE ME THIS(BM, RB, BG) Riddler kidnaps the Bat's two sidekicks, and the only way to save them is for Batman to solve Riddler's puzzles which reveal his identity one step at a time.
ARKHAM MAYHEM(BM, RB, BG) Proffesor Strange has released all the inmates of Arkham, and has captured Batgirl, Gordon, Yin, and Robin in order to lead Batman into his clutches. Now Batman must beat all of his most dangerous enemies, save his allies, before time runs out in Strange's book.
How's that for a Season 4?
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 20, 2005 21:32:57 GMT -5
Flying and Falling, I like the title but the story sounds a bit repetitive, but I'd like to see how it would all turn out
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Post by The Jokester on Dec 20, 2005 21:56:16 GMT -5
What? No Joker? *chuckles* I like the sound of your ideas All Star. It seems that they just run into each other instead of just having seperate episdoes. Really good work
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Post by All Star Batman on Dec 20, 2005 21:59:54 GMT -5
Don't worry, Joker would be in Arkham Mayhem. And thank you. They should hire me to write for them.
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Post by The Jokester on Dec 20, 2005 22:04:47 GMT -5
*nods* I agree with that *stares at the stories again and gaps* seriously...wow...
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 20, 2005 23:49:50 GMT -5
How about a Riddler story I love it when you do those plus I miss the guy.;D
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 21, 2005 0:31:18 GMT -5
thats a very good season 4 "All Star"... here's another Riddler Spot for u 1riddler52105... Riddler's Dilemna
Riddler gives up on his career of crime, and hides himself away in a small sub-division of Metropolis, under the guise of Edward Nigma. as of recently, after his encounter with Bats and Cluemaster, he has realized that his previous goal was pointless, and almost tacky. as he adjusts to a regular life, he is constantly complused to babble out random riddles, and slowly, he is labeled a weirdo by his neighbours, and he becoms a recluse in his own house. he decides to head to gotham, where the episode begins with him telling the above story over in his head, wondering what the point of it all is... he realizes he's meant to be the riddler, but soon, he cuts that idea again, figuring out that he will just keep battling batman, and eventually die, without a legacy to leave behind, or someone to leave it behind to... and then he spots batgirl! he smiles a sick smile, the riddling evil brought forth to him again... batman goes out on patrol, and looks up at the sky, as the bat signal flares up into the sky, and he rushes to the police department, to talk to gordon. "Batman! It's Barbara! My Barbara! She hasnt been home in two days now! Something's wrong!" batman realizes that she hasnt been on patrol for those two days, and becomes suspicious. It's then that the riddler pops out, konking Gordon on the head with his cane, and waltzing out towards batman. "thats right batman... she's been MISSING... and wat do u know? so has BATGIRL! am i right? of course im right! i figured if i couldnt get ur identidy, which i eventually will, then i'll solve HERS! the commisioners KID!! wat are the CHANCES! hahaha! well, batsy, batgirl has of recently decided to... convert. did i introduce you to... CHANCE!" barbara steps out, with the same dress she wore as batgirl, which is died green, with riddles all over it, and torn in some places, like riddlers costume. her hair is black, and she has a similar mask on as riddler, replacing the bat-mask and cape. in her hands is a miniture riddler cane... "and trust me! she'll eventually crack completely, and babble ur identidy too! iv been quizzing her everynite! hahaha!" "U wont get anywhere with that riddler. she has yet to figure my identidy out..." "Liar! dont try to bluff me! i am the king of this castle!" and so the battle begins. Gordon gets up, and riddler, trips him with his cane, while batman is forced to battle his brain-washed sidekick, blocking all of her swings and kicks, and avoiding hitting her. eventually however, he ducks as she lunges with her cane, and goes over his back, flinging into the riddler, whos tormenting gordon. riddler falls back, into the batsignal, shattering it, and electrocuting him, and launching him forward, of the building, down several stories, and almost to his death, before his cane, still gripped in his unconcious hand, catches on one of the horizontal flag poles, and he hooks around it, straight intot he window, right in the commisionars office... gordon look up at barbara, who snaps out of her own "trauma", and finally, the comish figures it out. "Bat--- Batgirl? You're Batgirl?"
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 21, 2005 9:21:22 GMT -5
That was awesome!!! Joe-Destructive I hero you
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 21, 2005 12:39:13 GMT -5
who shall i use as the villain next... hahaha, who remembers that annoying "Babydoll" character...? i remember i made a story where she teams up with... scarface... but it was odd...*shudders as he remembers her "i didnt mean too" line...
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Post by All Star Batman on Dec 21, 2005 13:21:03 GMT -5
That's a good Riddler story joe, but shouldn't it be TO BE CONTINUED.. after Gordon figures it out? Seriously, do we need Babydoll on the show? Really?
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 21, 2005 13:39:04 GMT -5
The episode begins with Ventriliquest in Arkham, in the lounge, sitting with fellow rogues watching a cornball movie about a little girl who believed that she could save the Christmas spirit, called "Babydoll." scarface continues to stick his tongue out as she says corny little lines, "I didn't *mean* to!" etc. while Arnold watches contenly. before long, scarface hurls a plate at the tv screen, breaking it. the guards rush to secure arnold, but scarface gives them a good kick in the face(one guard has forgotten to put his mask on) and the two of them make a run for it, and make it out of Arkham. the warning goes out on tv, about their escape, and the camera cuts to the scene of a living room, with the tv on, and the back of a chair facing us. a woman(in the chair, but not visible) says, "Well look at that. It's playtime again..." batman and batgirl begin looking for the arkham escapees, but have no luck over the first night. meanwhile, scarface and arnold are hidden within a sold-out mannequin factory, and scarface is brooding, waiting for a new plan to come to his head. mugsy and rhino suggest re-using the giant dummy idea, because they were able to reassemble most of it, without the head, but scarface smacks the both of them. "I need a fresh idea. I need a new... edge..." There's a large crash from behind them as a crate of dummies falls from the ceiling. "Oopsies. I didn't *mean* to." the girlish voice echoes throughout the warehouse, but she is nowhere to be seen. scarface orders her to be found and shot, but as they run intot he shadows, thers a different gun-shot, and babydoll comes out of the shadows, dragging mugsy and rhino in a net, from her gun. scarface grabs his gun, but before he can even aim, babydoll throws a bouncy ball, which lets off a large blinding flash. "I came to prepose a partnership, not to be shot at..." "Sorry, little girl, i dont work with dames." scarface says, with an annoyed look on his face. "But sir! don't you know who that IS? its babydoll! remember? from the movie? i thot u loved it!" "yeah, dummy, thats why i chucked a plate at it..." babydoll looks up at them, confused as they continue arguing. "Ms Doll! Welcome aboard! You're our new parter!" "Okeydokey then!" she giggles. The Bat duo continue looking for the Ventriliquest, and finally come across another heist, as Mugsy and Rhino break into the Wayne Tower, and attempt to grab a enhanced weapon, wish multiple barrels for different ammo. In Arnolds left hand sits Scarface, while in his right sits the new Babydoll, in her frilly purple dress, with her pigtails. "well, this is the swiss army knife of guns, now aint it bats?" scarface says, as he takes hold of the "Multiplex Gun", and fires a smoke grenade at bats, before getting away. within a week, they new crime trio break into half of gothams banks, raiding it for all their cash, using the advanced weapon at their disposal. It's then that batman comes across them, and then that the battle begins. babydoll snaps her fingers, and thers a loud thudding from around the corner, as the giant scarface comes around the corner, and picks up the ventriliquest, whos holding the small scarface. "I got one of my own too!" babydoll giggles, as a second robot comes around the corner, smiling horendously like Babydoll, and looking just like her. "Oh, no..." Batan sighs, "Not again." as the two scarfaces move towards the bat duo, babydoll fires the Multiplex Gun at Batgirl, who ducks, and somersaults her way away from them. batman hhoks his grappling hook around the giant scarfaces arm, and begins battling the ventriliquest and the miniature scarface, who has a shotgun. batgirl does the same, and kicks the little babydoll, who accidentally unleashes a heat-beam, decapitating the giant scarface robot. the head rolls backwards, and hits the pavement, and explodes, stabbing several pieces into the giant Babydoll, which stumbles back, and falls over onto an overpass, breaking through onto the highway, where it begins electrocuting Batgirl and Babdoll. babydoll runs out into traffic, and batgirl hooks her grappling hook into the overpass, and swings attempting to grab baydoll, as a car speeds quickly at her. the camera cuts the scene at the last second before you see iof batgirl grabs her or not, and if she gets hit or not. batman flips in the air, and lands on the left hand of the giant, headess robot, and trips arnold. bats snatches scarface, and begins running upwards onto the giant shoulders, and calls to arnold. "Arnold! You were getting better! Please! You have to give up this NONSENSE!" he ten drops scarface into the gaping hole that used to hold the head, into the wires, frying scarface, and lighting him on fire eventually. arnold screams, and looks down in shame. "Now Arnold... I need to know where Scarface hid the money." Batgirl appears and says, "Batman, thtas going to be a problem. I think Babydoll took off with the money. she left us a decoy..." she says as she holds up a busted up robot doll of Babydoll. arnold: "Oh, dear..." On a plane, heading somewhere, Baydoll counts her money, and giggles, "I didnt mean to!"
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 21, 2005 13:41:39 GMT -5
i dont think we need babydoll. she was so annoying, but still, i just wanted to type this story down... i figured that a dummy and a "doll" should team up, so... yeah. this is more of a prank episode...
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 21, 2005 19:05:14 GMT -5
Babydoll's annoyance made her a cool character IMO, but I would keep her at a minimum, like Cluemaster. I even thought up a script for my Two-Face episode, its in the making of the second part but I'm proud of it
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Post by The Dark Knight on Dec 21, 2005 19:05:52 GMT -5
I'd really like to see Clock King though, especially if he could team up with Riddler in a battle or partnership with their knowledge of time and wisdom.
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 21, 2005 21:02:07 GMT -5
I Love the story Joe_Destructive! I hero you again I am glad Riddler didn't kill himself man, I would be sad... They should make a "The Batman" motion picture! Kind of like "Batman vs Dracula" except the Riddler will star in it along with the other villains of Gotham!
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Post by The Jokester on Dec 21, 2005 21:16:16 GMT -5
Oooo! *claps* I agree. That would be a great idea. Besides, we've only seen Riddler...twice? Maybe three times? *shrugs* Meh. All the more to keep him refreshing *grins*
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 21, 2005 21:20:32 GMT -5
Two times he has appeared to think Ivy has more episodes hmmm... I think we BatFans should march over to Robert Englund's house and beg him to do an episode heck, if we do good he will probably do two. Just Kidding but, I miss him allot along with Mr.Freeze and the rest of the gang. That is actually weird that SCarface made an appearnce in Season 3 but, Riddler hasn't well all villains are equal. Bring back the Riddler along with Ragdoll
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Post by The Jokester on Dec 21, 2005 21:58:12 GMT -5
Here are the villains I think they need to be using more -
Riddler Ragdoll Spellbinder Mr. Freeze Firefly Clayface And maybe Catwoman
Forgive me if I left out somebody
These are the villains that need to be explored more. I mean, we've only seen Catwoman four times throughout the entire series and Mr. Freeze has only had two apperences. Ditto with Firefly. Clayface has only had pretty much three apperences (excluding Rubberface of Comedy) while the rest only have had one
...maybe there should be a huge super-villan team-up...
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Post by joe_destructive on Dec 22, 2005 3:30:03 GMT -5
clock king was neat! but he only had two epies in the original series, and the second one was kinda corny... and yes, i agree, babydoll was an interesting character, but should be kept... away. i wanna see a brawl between firefly and gearhead. that would be interesting in my thoughts, as would a ragdoll/ riddler kinda thing. both are skinny, flexible, and awesome as possum can be! maybe i'll think of a story for them... thanks for keeping my thread alive and hot for so long guys! ur great! im still thinking of stories!
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Post by The Jokester on Dec 22, 2005 4:10:24 GMT -5
And I'm trying to get around to working on my Harley/Joker one ;D I have the idea out in my head. I just need to get it into text now... BTW, your stories and ideas rock Joe
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Post by ??The Riddler?? on Dec 22, 2005 12:05:26 GMT -5
I am trying to come up with a story of my own but, so far your stories have greatly impressed me Joe_Destructive! I hero you again. You know, I actually thought of doing a Ragdoll/Riddler story along with a Firefly/Gearhead one. I think these characters share quite abit of the same qualities. I'll be working on some new ones for now Merry Christmas everyone.
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